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You push her. She embraces you.
You beat her. She cuddles you.
You smother her. She let's you be free.
You belittle her. She bigs you up.

You make her feel She makes you feel worthless Valued
Unattractive Attractive
Useless. Wanted.

You call her She calls you
Bitch Darling
Whore Loyal
Ugly Gorgeous
Boring. Entertaining.

We think your a
Low life piece
Piece of
Shit!!

(sorry guys! needed to let it out)

sjw

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Comments & Feedback (45)

Amazing piece, very heartfelt I can relate well with this.

Hey!! Great piece, love how you've written this! Guy sound a right tw*t !! Xxx

You are one strong lady! Go girl! ✊🔥

Powerful. Like the use of typeset too. Let it out!!😡😡

@LivingDeadGirl thank you hun and 😽for the repost

@DaddyDooDahs thank you ☺ yes he is! But to everyone else he's charming, I just wish she would leave him 😥

@naaviie I've often thought of inviting him for dinner and putting a arsenic in his food 🙎 x

@naaviie (a) arsenic typing too fast lol 😽

@eddie12309 thanks hun and thank you for the repost 💞

@OdinsFist thank you for the repost ☺

This is well written! I hate people who act like that!

He seems nice x no one deserves that and you are very brave to let it all go x

@sjw hahaha he deserves it by the sound of things, she has to realise one day though?!

@nikujagagirl thank you, I agree hun ☺ thank you for the repost 😽

@naaviie I hope so I think her self confidence is 0 thanks to him! He's twisted her mind so much she blames herself 😞

@sjw get it out girl! He needs to have a word with himself! Or I will! Grrrr! 😡 great write babe 😘

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@gazplend thanks babe and for the repost 😽😽😽

@sjw You're welcome!

@lemonz thank you sweetie 😚

@sjw all you can really do babe is be there for her! -hugs- 😘

@jactheninja thank you for taking the time to read it ☺

Damn it's such a frustrating situation!! 😖 with a good friend like you though, that's gotta help 💚

@smellyfingers thanks babe, I know 🙍 hugs gratefully received 😽

@naaviie thanks hun, I hope so 💞

Wow, a guy like that deserves nothing less than a ten thousand kicks in the nuts😏 Great poem🌟

@DuRoLuRo tell me about it! Thank you, and thanks for the repost ☺

@meggie2012 thanks for the repost 😽

No problem :D

LOL

A**HOLE!!! (not you, of course!) Hope whoever it is can see they are worth more 😔😚

@sjw no problem it deserved it

@MrsS thanks for the read I really appreciate it 😽

@melody thank you for the repost 😽

Been here and it's tough...when a guy gets your self confidence and rubs it into the ground...you blame yourself for their behaviour....nuts I know...with love and support let's hope she finds the strength within her to get out😓😓😓😓

@misslittleDHP 😿sorry to hear that hun, glad your not still in it, he's basically destroyed her, I don't know what to do for her other than be supportive but sometimes it's so hard 😿 I just hope she finds the strength from somewhere to leave him before it's to late xx

@misslittleDHP thanks for the repost sweetie, how's your little one doing now? ☺😽

@minxyMolly thanks for the repost 😽

@sjw no probs chick 😘 I hope your friend will be alright 😔 repeating previous comments he sounds such a bastard! Just make sure he doesn't isolate her fro

M you all!

@minxyMolly he has to a certain extent but we still have regular contact ☺

@sjw she is fine and the rash is going so all is fab...thanks for asking my sweet...means a lot ❤❤❤

I've got a friend going through similar. She's a beautiful & selfless person, but her bloke makes her feel like shite. Over last few months he's chipped away at her self esteem even further, & she's just found out he's had a dalliance with the 'village bike'. She's devastated & had some difficult times ahead. Your words really brought it all to mind 😔😌

@Fly10 there really are some nasty guys out there, the thing is he's like prince charming to everyone else and behind closed doors he turns into a monster, but she always blames herself " if I hadn't given him the wrong glass" or "not refused him sex" thats what he's down to her! I hate him with a vengeance I could easily pay someone to dispose of him...🔫💣💊💉 wish he would get with someone else!

Perhaps we could form a Hit Squad?! Such fun!😂😂😉😘

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@RichWithey I know 😒 thank you 😽 did you win the comp?

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