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Arguments

(Feedback welcome! Never written a poem)

It's like a game,
When we fight,
Starting at nil,
Playing all night,
There's often a point,
Where we level the score,
But for you,
It's too hard,
To dismiss anymore.

Badminton,
Or tennis,
Tend to have 2 sides,
One person hits a ball,
The other replies.

That's how it used to be...

But with you,
You hit harder and harder again,
Beginning to bruise my ego... And skin.
You refuse to let me,
Argue my case,
Instead choosing often,
To bloody my face.

Is it your choice?
Or are you hurting like me?
Fighting your anger,
To let me be free?
I tried to leave once,
I tried to walk away,
But your anger erupted,
And you "convinced me",
To stay.

By hitting your ball,
As often as you do,
You've broken it,
Completely,
And utterly too.
It no longer knows,
How to bounce back,
Only to play defence,
Against such an attack.

The difference between a ball and me,
Is the game ends for the ball.

Polo

@Polo

Student, living in London, loves family, friends, partner, focused and driven, believes in the goodness of people...

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Nicely written but hope it's not true

Well you've certainly written one now. 👏👏👏 As @sarahgamal says, hope it's not true. Cracking write, and welcome aboard 👍❤

No no @sarahgamal and @leelee101 definitely not true! Thanks!

Brilliant!! As above, hope it's fiction! 🌟✨🌟

@Polo ok glad to hear that then. Welcome here and will be waiting for more 😊👍

@sleepydragon Welcome from me too! ✨🌟✨🌟

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Glad to read it's not true! Great first poem! :-)

amazing first poem 👏👏👏😘

Wow, great job😊&welcome to Opuss💙

@Polo loved it!

Thank you to everyone. Great to have some place to express without scrutiny! 😊

Fantastic poem! Love that the scheme changes as the poem grows more intense. Thank you for sharing this beautiful write😃

A strong first write...I enjoyed it very muchly...welcome to Opuss Hun ....enjoy 👏✨😘🌹💝

@misslittleDHP i agree xx really good ❤❤❤

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