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Life becomes a blurr...

a job away from home,
promise when you arrive you'll pick up the phone..

Seconds turn to minutes...

Minutes turn to hours.....

I call your number,
but there's no reply.
Didn't think you meant it, when you said goodbye..

A knock at the door...

Then the doorbell ....

Why is a policewoman
standing at my door.
She looks kind of awkward, and keeps looking at the floor...

R.T.A and your involved...

Grabbing my keys, I follow....

Then as the tears fall, unable to take in her words life becomes a blurr....

(A true story, thankfully he survived)

sjw

@sjw

Opuss has given me a love of words and writing...

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Excellent read my opuss 'goodbye in sleep' it's a bit like this but with a twist πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Oh @sjw sad sad sad πŸ˜’πŸ’™ but with a good ending

@glen thank you I just did πŸ˜”πŸ˜˜

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks for the RP it was a pretty awful time but all was well in the end β˜ΊπŸ˜˜πŸ’—

Ohhhh sad and scary. Cant imagine how u felt. Glad he is ok❀❀

Thank god for the happy ending hun πŸ’™πŸ˜˜

Oh scary, close one πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@sarahgamal probably the worse knock at my door I've ever had, but it could've been so much worse! Thanks for the RP hun πŸ’πŸ’πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 @naaviie thanks guys!! And yayy! For the happy ending ☺☺see all that blue worked its magic what a cute little guy 😍😘

@sjw πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ‘

Glad everything is ok! 😊

@MelchiorJ13 thanks for the RP did you catch my other entry? 😘

@sara_lou ☺thanks for the RP πŸ’

@sjw any time! This is a brilliant piece πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ yep, I saw your other piece, before, my iPod probably screwed up the like and repost πŸ˜„πŸ˜–πŸ˜œπŸ˜‰πŸ‘

I can breathe now...wow that must have been so terrifying Hun....so happy he was ok!!πŸ’šβ€πŸ’š

@minxyMolly thanks for the RP πŸ’

@misslittleDHP thank you! Yes it was pretty scary...but at least for us it ended well ☺

πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ‘ πŸ‘ for the RP xx

@sjw no problems is very good piece very sad 😘

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@RichWithey thanks rich..it was difficult and I'm glad it's in the past, thanks for the amazing comment glad it came over like that and a big hug for the RP 😘

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