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Stripped.

Words supplied by @misslittleDHP

Your actions blew through my
Heart, like a WIND stripping
A TREE of it's leaves and left it
BARE, empty cold and ALONE.

Now I TENSE when I feel you
next to me, your touch, your
voice, after everything you did,
how did you THINK I would react.

sjw

@sjw

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Comments & Feedback (10)

Awesome! 💚

@sjw brilliant my sweet...really simple yet amazing use of words...I found this one tough actually...you one clever lady xxx

@naaviie thank you 💞

@misslittleDHP thank you sweetie I actually found this one the easiest, probably because I've just had my coffee lol! 😽 as mr @smellyfingers done his chp yet??? 😽

Thanks for the repost 😽

@sjw don't think so Hun!

@sjw Fantastic, so simple, yet so sharp. Great stuff xx

@MrsS thank you💞

@MrsS thanks for the repost😽

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