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Breaking Hearts

Breaking hearts wherever I go
Even tho I have and had told you so
We are not working and you know
I need to leave and be on my own

Clear my head and do my thing
Get off the merry-go-round cos nobody wins
Chasing our arses kicking up a fuss
Respect and trust gone, its just hate love

Twelve years gone down the drain
Left with reasons on who's at blame
Two more little aching broken hearts
From being with you or from us being apart

I cannot stay while they witness
Mum and Dad argue and cuss
Enough already with this love/hate mess
I'd rather sleep on the street homeless

So two more broken hearts lost
Confused, broken but not forgot
Add another which is yours to make three
A fourth heart broken and that's inside me.

smellyfingers

@smellyfingers

Asking lots of questions and thinking through the ones that are unanswered!! Kik: smellyfingers soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/smellyfingers

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Comments & Feedback (26)

Beautiful but sad write 🙍😽

I can relate to this so much. When you can write and touch the heart strings of others your literary perfection is complete. I salute you!

Really well written but really sad 💗

A great piece sir, excellently written. But very sad 👍😢

@CluelessOwl thank you for repost 👍

@sjw thank you babe 💋

@Toulbox thank you! Unfortunately this kind of situation is quite common and it's always the kids that get hurt! Damned if I do and damned if I don't, extremely tough call to make but when it get so bad all respect has gone you have to save your sanity and those involved! Thank you for repost 💋

@PoppyA thank you babe ❤😘

@leelee101 thank you sir, had to get it out me system. Thanks for repost 🍻

@smellyfingers been there and got the t shirt - wish I'd written the poem tho! You've inspired me to write my last two pieces both at opposite ends if the spectrum. Thank you!

@smellyfingers Been where you are. Can do nothing except say...I understand 😔

A really honest poem and I felt it I truly did...great write as usual my lovely xx

@Toulbox thank you and very happy to have inspired you as that is what opuss is all about IMO, will check out your poems, thank you 👍

@Fly10 it's not nice but have to look on bright side of things and turn it into a positive situation, far worse people off than me, not looking for sympathy or any of that nonsense. Was good to write it tho and get it out. Thank you for the repost 😘

@misslittleDHP thank you hun, emotional roller coaster that is life I guess. Thank you babe and for the repost 😘👍

That's exactly how I viewed (& usually how I view life in general)-there's always someone worse off. And I def didn't want sympathy at the time-we'd got ourselves into the mess, & it was up to us to sort it. Empathy, however, is very different, & I'm lucky to have a tight group of friends (all with issues-I like to stick with that I know😉) who were there for me. Didn't stop a few years of hell though! And in the end? I went back! But for us, it's exactly what was needed, & so despite it all, I wouldn't change it. "But enough about me-let's talk about you. What do You think about me?" Just a little quote to make you smile 😉😄

Ohhh! So sorry😢what a tough place to be in. Good thoughts for a peaceful resolution!

@Fly10 I'm glad you see life that way too. I usually deal with my issues on my own and don't put it onto others, I'm good like that and can handle quite a lot, I like to think and work stuff out from all perspectives and situations (some of my poems are written from others point of view), I seem to have a good way of dealing with bad situations, that's not to say I feel lonely or any of that crap, far from it in fact, I enjoy my own company and fill my mind and time with interesting things (opuss is interesting and very addictive lol) my mind is very active and I have a theist for knowledge and like to share it if possible. 👍 lol I think your very honest and a great intellect and you speak lots of sense, wisdom in abundance with a whopping big heart, probably why I like you, similar perhaps? 😜😘

@ckahn thank you hun and no need to be sorry just one of them life lessons I guess and I'm on "the rising curve" (bob dylan line) 👍😘

@smellyfingers Kindred spirits? Definitely. The Dylan mention sealed it 😊😘😘

Sad but good mate 🐒💨🐒💨🐒💨🐒💨😜

Really good, nice writing👍

@glen @Stablish thank you fellas and for the repost 🍺🍺🍻

@melody thank you for repost 👍

@smellyfingers good poem luv 👌

@powpunch thank you babe 😘

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