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Natures Cure

We tripped the fandango into the surrender of the light
Flirting fireflies glowed all warm and bright
The neon flowered petals' backbeat pulse
And the gently lit grass tickled our naked toes

Brightly feathered birds sung to us their lovers song
An army of wild rabbits jumped and thumped along
In the distant depths of time we heard the mountain wolves howl
And I looked into your eyes at the reflection of the pirouetting owls

We danced along the trail that led us to the river
Rainbow trout leaped in triumph and winked at our endeavours
The grizzlies clapped and growled so proud
And the frogs and toads croaked their notes and lept from pad to crowd

Silence. Complete stillness. No movements. Total darkness.

Then the wild flowing currents of pure and fresh aqua just froze.
We could feel the fear of tiny creatures peering up upon their toes.
I felt you tightly grip and squeeze my hand,
And as we slowly manoeuvred in unison we could smell it, but made no sounds

We moved in closer in our curiosity and youthful minds.
With the blurry hue of the moonlight glow we could just make out what the wildlife wanted us to find.
And they turned to us with sorrowed looks upon their frowns,
Like we was at fault and to blame for all these senseless acts of greed by mankind

I looked at you with no words left to speak
I was ashamed but watched as a tear fell down your cheek
Following its journey intently I was hypnotised as it finally fell off your chin
And as that single tear dropped into the black river of mans sin......

.....I was shocked and jumped out of my skin
The cheers and music continued as that teardrop turned everything back to technicolor movement again

Then we was off on our way...
Into the future with brighter days.
In the distance we paused and stopped to look back as the wildlife merrily waved,
And as you pulled me in for a kiss I knew I was saved

smellyfingers

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πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Quite brilliant mate. Really like this one. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ»πŸ»

This is a lovely one, well done. I saw it in my minds eye all the way through! β˜ΊπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

This is awesome babe the imagery is amazing it made me feel all warm and fluffy πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 thank you kind sir and for then beers β˜ΊπŸ‘

@crowncottage Awww glad you like it Linda mwah πŸ’‹

@sjw Awww thank you hun and glad you all warm and fluffy now, lol πŸ’‹πŸ’‹

Awesome Stuff! πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ»πŸ»

Wow wow wow...I have to say Hun, this is a fave of mine...AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL, the words danced on my tongue in melody...stunning imagery...a real treat to read my sweet βœ¨βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨βœ¨

@Weirdwolf thanks fella πŸ»πŸ»πŸ”πŸŸπŸ‘

@misslittleDHP awwwwww thank you Kim you're too kind babe, glad you enjoyed it tho πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’‹πŸ‘

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