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One Word Story (Explanation)

One Word Story (explanation)

This is my attempt at "abstract art" through words. Enjoy this long ass explanation/rant. Hope I don't come across as pretentious or something. Just wanted people to understand it ;-)

All stories have a beggining/middle and end. Just like our lives. Not all stories have to be pages and pages of words. Some people's lives get cut short and on the surface may have no meaning, some don't understand the meaning of their lives.

This story may have no meaning to you, on the surface but, dig a little deeper and we may find a meaning and understanding, just like in life.
Not everything is simple and we shouldn't believe things we read and we should ask questions. Just because it's not written in a clever,original, mind blowing, genius smart arse way doesn't mean it's not good, lol. Ego? Nope, knowledge. Knowledge isn't power IMO knowledge is shared and it should be shared with love.

Here we go then.......

Beginning = we all have to start somewhere.
Doorbell = someone is interrupting me, I'm busy doing things but someone wants to talk.
God = most of us have an opinion about god however you define it
Debated = let's talk and work things out, pretty obvious. Lol.
Freedom = most of us want freedom in 1 way/form or another
Controlled = we are all controlled (parents/school/work/society/religion ect)
Ignorance = we are all ignorant to a degree. We are all not happy with the crap in the world but, what are we really doing about it? Turn the tv off? Ignore the beggar in the street? Debate that politicians are useless? Live in our own little bubbles and forget others?
Bliss = happy to be free or ignorant?
Blinded = some things we just don't see or choose not to see or the truth is hidden from us.
Agreed = I'm sure you will all agree, lol hopefully.
Two = me and god spoke and we agreed to disagree. Two millenniums lol. Two many times have we been lied too. Too/two = 2 lol.

MIDDLE = exactly that. Count how many words are in my story and I will come to the answer later.
Hope = we all hope for things. Did god give me hope? Do I hope for freedom and with hope, comes time, as in, in the future or in this case the rest of the story before you. Do you hope for love?
Knowledge = we all acquire it, use it wisely, maybe this story taught you something, I hope.
Peace = that's what I hope for
Equality = we should all be treated as equals
Together = you cannot have peace and equality if divided
Harmony = Once we have freedom, hopefully knowledge, peace, equality, togetherness then we can live in harmony
Write = I'm writing about it but am I right?
Wrong = right or wrong (or write and wrong) at least I'm debating, giving knowledge, love, hope ect. Is it wrong to write these things? Is it wrong to want these things?
Sad = it makes me sad we don't have these things. Am I sad for wanting them, for hoping one day it may happen?
Song = I like music and a message/words can go far with music and reach a wider audience. How many lyrics to a song can you remember off the tip of your head? Not many? But if I played a familiar bit of music you should remember the lyrics or at least some of them. Our brains store away information and we just need that little trigger to remember things, lol. Also love is one of the most written/sung subjects. Also if you notice I put "Sad Song One Love" lol but I also put "Write Wrong Sad Song One Love" lol I haven't written a good sad love song yet, hopefully I will, 1 day.
One = am I on my own thinking all this? Maybe all it would take is 1 song for people to realise? One person to stand up then others would follow?
Love = love conquers all and is why it's at the end of the story, infinite? Once we find the love from within ourselves we can then love others and the things around us. So, the beginning starts with God and ends in love, just like life, did god create man and will he love us at our end (death)? At the start of our lives we are little miracles, uneducated, ect ect. Religions IMO plays a big part in our lives (for good or bad, directly and indirectly) but its the journey we take that defines us. Good vs evil here too. If you argue with god are you evil lol? At the start I debated so does that make me evil? I told god what I wanted and we agreed to disagree, lol you work it out. I'm not saying god is evil im saying evil is taught and put into us from childhood, we all battle our own inner demons but at the end (end of story) love wins, infinite? Evil IMO is fear, doubt, anger, loneliness and all negative engeries/emotions ect ect. Sometimes to get to love we experience all the crap in life to get it and understand it. Don't let go once you get it.
End = all things come to an end altho I believe death doesn't part us, only a lack of love which is also why love is at the end, infinite? lol

Ok so about the numbers I mentioned earlier.

There are 26 words in my story half of 26 = 13 which apparently is unlucky for some, lol but I put the word MIDDLE exactly in the middle of the story, mid life crisis, lol
Also Friday the 13th came from when the French King ordered all Knights Templars be burned, hung and slaughtered, it stuck with us through fear, fear controls us. Let go of fear and let go of control.

Also this story could read that a Preacher knocked on my door, and it didn't go too well. Lol

Hope you enjoyed it as much as me. From a "simple" 26 word story came all this, words are great ain't they, lol.
Peace and love
;-)
XxxxX

BEGINNING

Doorbell
God
Debated
Freedom
Controlled
Ignorance
Bliss
Blinded
Agreed
Two
Disagree

MIDDLE

Hope
Knowledge
Peace
Equality
Together
Harmony
Write
Wrong
Sad
Song
One
Love

END

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I get the explanation, but i don't get the poem..πŸ˜”

Lol I love how you see everything it's beautiful your a genius plain and simple 😊 and I got most of it but thanks get it all now 😘

@DuRoLuRo it's a story lol not a poem. Each word means something to me and hopefully you and others. The words I used are not random they have meaning and work on different levels for different reasons. If you read each word and think about that word separately you hopefully will get a image in your mind then move to next word and so on. I put the explanation for what they ment to me and how/why I used and structured them that way. Also some of the words have another meaning if read in groups, I explained that too. Does this make sense? Lol

@aleishagayle20 Awww thank you babe Mwah xxxx

@smellyfingers You Sir, are a man I would call Brother, I respect you through your mind and your words, and your outlook and this piece if work is F*****g Awesome!!!!!

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@smellyfingers hehe dont need to thank me your great 😘

@smellyfingers Yeah that's called haiku. I still don't get it

So I gues that makes me retarded. So many labels, so little time.

@DuRoLuRo lmao chill out you don't have to get it make your own interpretation about it lol 😊

Very clever mate 🍻

@Weirdwolf I feel the same about you mate :-) I said before you have my sword

@aleishagayle20 Sorry.. I'm in such a sucky mood right. Don't feel like reading anythingπŸ˜“

@smellyfingers as you have mine good Sir ;)

@DuRoLuRo lol ok. Thanks for constructive input, appreciate it :-)

@glensaggs beers are on glen yay lol :-)

@smellyfingers Thanks for sarcasm. Just what I needπŸ˜”

@DuRoLuRo if you cannot take it then don't give it lol

@smellyfingers Wow... Really. Fuck you.

@DuRoLuRo cheer up lol hey that's prob why you don't get it 😊 and dont take it out on @smellyfingers he wasn't being sarcastic lol here have a 🚬 one of these 🍺 and go on my treat πŸ”πŸŸ lmao hehe

@aleishagayle20 Whatever.

@DuRoLuRo come on give me a smile? How about a joke? Why do the chicken cross the road? 😏 lmfa rofl hehehe......... To get to the other side hahahahahaha! Crack myself up lol 😊

@DuRoLuRo you really don't want to be picking a fight with me dude so, I'll just smile and say have a nice day :-)

@smellyfingers Hit me!

The story means something different to everyone. Clever. Shows the power of words.

Wow! Very clever 😊

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