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Pulling Roots

Something inside reminds you to forget
Everything which you do not know about yet

Hard work building societies graves
Ploughing fields in memories brave
A man once fell from a blow to his soul
Always had a smile for friend or foe

Walking on fertile frames in sections
Fenced off from societies injections
I claim this earth here as my home!
But who am I to inject natures own?

Cut from emotions divine
Pulling roots from vines
Holy man bursts his juice
Bleeding red/white and blues

Half moments fill lifetimes of old
Success in fame and fortune told
Fortunately graves have been readied
On your marks, grow a set, go get with it

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Like this especially the " blow to the soul" line. β˜ΊπŸ’š

I like the flow of this - However.... (this is where I risk sounding like a complete nugget-head!!!) I don't get it!!!!!!!! (there, said it! πŸ˜±πŸ˜πŸ˜‚) It seems very 'cryptic' and my brain just isn't wired that way! (I NEVER try the cryptic clues in word puzzles, guess I'm just too darn straight! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚). Care to explain this to my dumb *ss????!!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@MrsS hehehe thanks, yes. Guess its a bit deep and would take awhile to explain each line. The opening is basically about people who are worried or affraid to live or experience new things, forget the internal warnings and live life today. 2nd section: societies graves (lots of corruption ect), ploughing fields (we was all once farmers tending to land), man fell from blow to his soul (we all take a hit, that's life), always a smile for friend or foe (smile and be happy, some laugh from fear too). That section could also be about war (fallen soldiers in war fields)

@smellyfingers Ah, I see.... πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ sorry, can't stop laughing at myself!! I will re-read with cryptic eyes! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„πŸ˜š

Now I see πŸŽ† !!!!!!!! You see, I'm a quick learnererer! πŸŽ“πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ πŸ‘

@MrsS fertile frames in sections (divided land or areas), fenced off (picket fences or homes) societies injections (bad/evil stuff, drugs ect), I claim this earth here (this is my home or land), who am I to inject (who am I to say what's write or wrong, also hopefully referring to the graves section before or who am I to interfere with nature and to let life take its course), cut from emotions divine (I/we are all made of the same stuff: emotions), pulling roots (ancestry or advice), vines (wine cos it's used in biblical times and vines twist and turn: like life), holy man bursts his juice (back to wine or holy water or sexual reference), bleeding red/white and blue (bleeding country (colours of flag), half moments line (ever has your life rush before you in an instant replaying old memories? Or remember who we were and how we are now as in wars, religion in previous sections?), success line (we are told to be successful we need fame and fortune), fortunately line (luckily I think I understand societies problems and the bullshit and some should be put into a grave: banks, corporate tossers, religious personnel ect), on your marks, grow a set, go get with it (are you ready and understand and accepting of change? Grow a set of bollocks and do something then!! Are you doing anything to change?) Hahahaha that's it hun. But maybe others will interpret it in different ways, hopefully. But that's more or less what I ment. Mwah xxx

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