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I'll Never Forget You

When like a candle now,
Your light has ceased;
When like the sun,
Your warmth subsided;
After your radiance completely left me,
Alone in the dimness that knows
no morning or night;
The coldness making me quiver,
As I try to console myself
With the rhymes you left behind --
The songs that took me to sleep.
I then close my eyes
To feel once again,
The warmth of your tender kiss;
Bringing me comfort, yet with pain,
Knowing I'll wake up the next morn
Without your voice whispering
words of love.
Though maybe late have I professed
The love deep in my heart concealed,
I pray that the wind take my words
To where you are at rest now.
Until my candle's last teardrop fall,
When I can be with you --
Remember my love,
I'll never forget you.

Β©danabelle

softwhispers

@softwhispers

A woman who weaves deep emotions into words, dictated by her heart, felt by her soul, whispered softly in a poem.

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Beautifull write! Very moving πŸ˜₯😘

Absolutely wonderful hunny πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ lovely stuff πŸ‘β€

@gazplend thank you..this is actually an old poem I wrote when my then bf told me he has throat cancer. We broke up 3 years after though..πŸ˜”

@leelee101 thank you dear for the lovely comment, and for reposting too..πŸ˜ŠπŸ’š

@IrrationalKimmy @saralou @naaviie thank you beautiful ladies for the reposts..πŸ˜ŠπŸŒΈπŸŒΉπŸŒΊπŸ’š

@skinnylove thank you for the repost..πŸ˜ŠπŸ’šπŸŒΉ

@sarahgamal thanks for the repost..πŸ˜šπŸŒΉπŸ’š

@softwhispers my pleasure,very good write πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ’

@gazplend thanks again..😊😊😊

@brownowl2012 thank you for reposting..πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜˜πŸ’šπŸ’

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