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The Intruder Part 1

SMASH!!
I was certain it was the sound of glass being shattered that created such a momentarily momentous sound storm. My eyes slammed open with the noise, yet it took a while for my eyes to adjust to my unlit and lightless room. I glanced over to my clock,to discover it was 2AM. I had to satisfy my curious urge to investigate what all the noise was about, so i stumbled out of my bed,Brushing my bed head hair off my face and rubbing my weary eyes. Not wanting to disturb anyone,although it seemed impossible to sleep through such a racket,i gingerly opened my bedroom door and tip toed in the direction of the stairs. I must of looked ridiculous holding my arms out like a zombie to guide my way around the pitch black house,but at that point i was more concerned of what had been happening downstairs. I reached the main hallway when i began to question where to go first, and whether being down here all alone with a possible intruder in the middle of the night was such a good idea. As i turned to examine the kitchen, my heart skipped a beat as a tall unrecognisable figure stood motionless in the centre of the room. My breathing became increasingly uncontrollable and i felt my hands begin to shake.
"who-a-ar-are-y-you?!?" i stuttered,trying my very hardest to sound calm and powerful without sucess.
The figured person didn't reply,instead,they took 3 very slow steps up to me and i felt their cool breath start to travel down my neck,and i swore at that moment,i would not see the sun rise.

tastetherainbow

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My opuss is broken, sorry guys :( farewell :(

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My very first opuss story :) hope you enjoy and part 2 will be released very soon :)

Fab write hun👏👏👏👏👏

Great story!

@misslittleDHP thank you so much😊❤

@Platypus thank youu!! 😄💗

@crowncottage thank you for the repost! ❤

You are welcome, it's very good! 😊

Very good start👍💚

@eddie12309 thank you!!😊

Gasp!! 😨😱 Very good, want to read some more! 💙

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