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Gone For Good

Clink clink clink
Glass falls to the floor
The bullet went straight through
And stuck itself in the dog

I fall
Into a pile of glass
I wince in pain
Every move cutting me more

Another shot
In the refrigerator
The dog howls
In his last dying breath

I breath heavily
The phone
It's across the hall
I slowly try to stand up

Bang!
A shot whizzed past me
Crash!
I'm back on the glass.

I army crawl
Every move
Painfully stabbing at me
All around

4 more feet
I hear a car drive up
"Help!"
It's no use

3 feet left
3 knocks on the door
"Open up!
Or we'll knock down the door!"

2 feet until the phone
It's so close
I hear another bang
Then the door collapsed

1 foot
I'm so close
I hear them
"Come out come out wherever you are!"

I have it
In my hand
Footsteps clomp behind me
9-1-1 call

Hello, what is-
"Tsk, tsk, tsk
Such a naughty girl."
3 burly men tower over me

"Help!" I scream
"Ma'am whats your-"
Crunch! One of them
Crushed the phone with their foot

"Help! Someone plea-"
A foot is laid on my neck
"Bye bye my sweet."
Bang!

I'm
Gone
For
Good

TaintedTulip

@TaintedTulip

I'm me. You're you. And all together, we'll write beautiful words. Email me :) kittylover2467@yahoo.com

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Comments & Feedback (7)

This is so tragic!

Wow this is a scary and gripping write...fabbo👏👏👏👏💗💗💗💗

Wow- heart stopping, terrible and tragic- I love your style of writing. Very gripping, would defiantly read more like that 😄😉😘💙😉😘👏

@TaintedTulip You're welcome!

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