"Alicia? Your.... But your dead?" I said, walking over to a ghostly figure, floating infront of me,
"What the flippin' heck?" Sam exclaimed, picking me up like a baby and running back a few steps,
"What, Amber, who is this?" Alicia said sternly,
"My—" I said, unsure if we were going out
"fiancé." Sam said, sounding super convincing,
"WHAT? You miss 2 weeks and your engaged!" she gawped and the stared at my ring finger,"Where's the ring then?" she stated,
"Well—" I tried to say the truth, but Sam cut me off,
"She took it off, not wanting it to get lost." he said smoothly like it was true, could I trust him, was he even called Sam? Has he been lying to me the whole time?
"So...are we in......heaven?" I asked, curious yet confused and scared. How?
How could I be in heaven when I wasn't dead?
Was I dead?
"yes. this. Is. Heaven." said an unfamiliar voice, was it God?
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@Dj_Mac do you want it to be the end and I'll do another one like 'Heaven v hell' or something? Haha ;) x
@ofelia I can't think of the ending if this isn't it! I know it's not a very good 'finale' but you got the gist of it ;) x
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