Water laps around me,
Pulling me under,
Soothing my burnt skin,
From my killing wonder.
The car we one sat in,
Was lit up with flames,
Until I drove us in,
The lake with sudden waves.
Darling, I'm sorry,
That this is how it ends,
The water full with smoke,
With bones full of broken mends.
I didn't mean it, I'm sorry.
That I drove us down,
I guess my anger just lost it,
And now we're here to drown.
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Eighteen. Macabre & Romance
Flames licking at the charred remains from the year. A memory they would forever hold so dear. She weeps into his coat, her body now a wreck. He stands there, resolute, feelings in check.
Jack, and Jill Went up the Hill To fetch a pail of Water What they found Instead, When they lay there In bed, Was a world full of Slaughter 'You wanna go Out?' I asked my Jill and Jill said, 'I don't...
Twisted, Connected One can't be without the other Two individuals so different, Yet from the same mother Linked, Undivided, Joined at the hip One remains tortured on earth, Into the shadows the...
Edged with poison, This lullaby, Drug induced haven, My child's eye, Focusing darkly, This wicked lie, Defeats me. Life, This paradise, A slice, You gave me, Love, You saved me, And snatched it away.
Innocence in a sad world. A silver streak in a dark cloud. Finding purpose to keep shining. Alone and fighting. The song you hear. Pain, loss and hate. Be sure she is not its singer. Friend or foe.
Why does the sun have to come and ruin my night.
Dead soul eyes Numbed brain the spectre of you a ghostly pain Oil on water iridescent sheen the clearest skies I've ever seen I want my piece I want my slice of cheap Valhalla paradise forgive...
He laughs and screams. My skin tears at the seams. Slather on the lotion. Drink the deadly potion. Trail your fingers on my skin. You commit this terrible sin. Upon my crevices goes your tongue.
@taylergoatier urrrmmm did I say competition cough, cough I meant erm constitution ;) or composition or something else that rhymes... With word I didn't mean to say. Hash tag this piece with (#firstlove) then @eddie12309 in the comments and you are entered.
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