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Two Years

24th July 2004 10:34 pm .It was like a cage of butterflies with a thousand nuclear bombs that had emptied out into my body. Nothing had ever felt like this before. My hands were trembling like an active volcano, my teeth gittering inside my skull. Was this the moment I had waited for for 4 years? He closed his eyes and lent into me. I followed. And for one moment I thought I was in ecstasy. Our lips were joined, our hands entwined. We kissed for what seemed like hours, slowly back and forth. I was in love. Who knew bestfriends could be like this. Danny pulled away and lent his head against mine and gave a cheeky smile. Maybe this was the start of something magical. I could feel it. Not in my heart but in my blood.

15th October 2006 11:12pm

It's like I couldn't breathe. All the carbon dioxide in my stomach had just eroded my insides. The nurse looked at me with a sorrowed look upon her face.
" I'm so sorry for your loss Miss Close ".
I still had my head down trying not to show my tear red stained face. Sorry for my loss? The loss of blood in my body. The loss of my soul.No. Danny.It wasn't until a second past my head flung up.
" No. He can't be dead. Where is he?! Let me see him now!" I demanded throwing my arms up in the air. My head was rushing. People running around me, colors fading in and out, merging into eachother. I started screaming and pushed the nurse up against the vending machine.
" HE'S NOT DEAD!" I was spitting in her face. Danny wasn't dead. I couldn't believe her. I let her go and ran down the ward corridor. My hair whipped my face at every lunge I took making scars on my face. Every second looking through windows to patients rooms. I had to take a second glance until I found Danny's room. I halted. And just stared into Danny's window to see him lying there, with a white sheet over his young body. It was like someone had pulled my heart out. Taken away my air and sold my soul. Danny was gone.

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Seriously well written, I really got into reading that!

Thank you!xxx

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Wow! I wanted more 😺

@RichWithey @sjw thank you! I might write a another one then yea?c

Yes please 😺

@sjw @RichWithey part II is up!x

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@RichWithey it's up already! Haha!x

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@RichWithey whatcha mean? What answers do you need? Hehe x

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You'll find it out in later parts. PATIENCE! @RichWithey haha!xxx

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@RichWithey LOST <3 haha! Part III is up! Gives you an inkling! One question is answered!xx

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@RichWithey didn't want you getting impatient! I don't think I have to do a part IIII now. And haha thanks, I thought the imagery was good tbh ;) x

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Well no.. But I think this story is nearly or is at the end tbh @RichWithey x

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