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Quiet

Walk with me I say to my heart,
The sand on the dessert is a place to start,
The air is hot and theres dunes aplenty
The wind is soft whipping a land barren and empty.
As we walk making foot steps in the sand,
Buried in an instant creating untrodden land,
Noone to follow guided only by me,
Controlling my forward walking free.
I stop look around nothing is found,
But wait just a second there are no sounds.
The silence I have met no birds, no trees so stark,
The only murmur I hear is the beat, beat, beat of my heart.
The world in which I live with noise polluted sounds,
I sit, reflect and meditate on silent dusty grounds.

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Really like this one. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โค

Liking this Terri ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 @eddie12309 I did a ladies hair yesterday she is late 80's I asked her if she had ever been abroad and what her favourite place was and she told me this story totally captured me to experience silence must b an amazing experience

Really love this ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘โค

This is beautiful Terri ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@sjw @sarahgamal thank you both xxx and thank u for rpxxxx ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

@sammielee46 @patdolan83 thank you both for Reposts ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

Lovely imagery! ๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒŸ

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@ckahn @RichWithey thank you both for the lovely comments and rp's ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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