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Smoke

It twirls and curls,
Up in the sky.
Leaving the fire,
Not saying goodbye.

This silent assassin,
Never asks why.
Beautiful yet deadly,
Stinging your eye.

Making the sky,
Frightening and dark,
Scarring the atmosphere,
Leaving its mark.

Creating black patterns,
For everyone to see.
Swirling, twirling,
Just like the sea.

Smothering, choking,
Thick, black and warm.
Like a big thunder cloud,
In a raging storm.

But even though,
It makes you choke,
You can't have a fire,
Without a little smoke.

twistedtail

@twistedtail

I like sketching, writing and music. I can play 8 instruments. I have two cats - Truffle (my fluffy evil genius) and Stanley ( his not-quite-as-evil sidekick).

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Very clever!

I don't know where you live, but we're just going up like a tinderbox here in the States. And it is only going to get worse as the weather starts swinging more wildly.

@VikingHorn I live in England but we just had a freak hailstorm in the place where I live and everythings battered!!! the hail was the size tennis balls!!! lol no matter where you live you can't escape the weather

@ckahn @RichWithey thanks i wrote this because i saw a bonfire through the window while i was doing a history essay abd i was looking and the patterns in the smoke

Wonderful imagery 😌🔥

@Fly10 thanks 😊

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