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Our Youth.

You had, a taste for trouble.
I had, eight battered knuckles.

You lived, inside a bubble.
I lived amongst the rubble.

And then we fell.

We fell in deep into the future.

You chose life, I was producer.

You played me just like a computer.

I let you win, I'm just a loser....

So you went out and made connections.

But I would fail all of their inspections.

We chose opposite directions.

When all I wanted was affection....

We had a little fun.
But you we're just far too young.
And I was just far too drunk.
On the scent of your amber perfume.

Did you find yourself?
Like you said you would?

And does it feel good?
When I live my life...
Like you wish you could.

We went out to catch a movie.

But I can't pick, I'm just too choosy.

I was blinded by your beauty.

I held you close, you held
me loosely.

I played along just like a fool.

And then I broke all of your rules.

You tried to use me like a tool.

I searched for truth.
You searched for jewels.

And I tried so hard to give you what you desired.
But I was not what you required.

I could have never passed your test.
I said goodbye, you have my best.

We had a little fun.
But you we're just far too young.
And I was just far too drunk.
On the scent of your amber perfume.

Did you find yourself?
Like you said you would?

And does it feel good?
When I live my life...
Like you wish you could.

unsuitableguy

@unsuitableguy

A mystery inside of an enigma wrapped in a burrito...Kik - theunsuitableguy

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Comments & Feedback (4)

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘love this and the line 'drunk on your amber perfume' is a great line โค

You're a phenomenal writer mate, you really are. I was half expecting after the producer/computer/loser a director line (cos directors are the boss and apparently women are too), but re-read it again and it's perfect as is ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘

Thanks Sienna @sjw

@smellyfingers Thank you. I appreciate it. Yes, director works. I might use that, thanks.

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