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If I should Die

If I should die
Think only this of me:
'Thank fuck he's dead. '
That should be the elegy.
Don't glorify the life I led.

Don't cry for undeserved hours
That, unlived, will never be;
The missing opportunity,
The cells of unborn memory.
I tried too hard to be someone
In doing so, I missed the vital point
False humility often took my fun
And put my silly ego out of joint.

Don't weep for my body
Broken by the laziness of flesh.
The bloom of youth was plucked.
So, fucked, you know skin-leather was not fresh;
The sun and gales had grizzled
What once was lean and veined and strong...
A chest that faces slept upon...
Limbs made taut when release comes on...
These by creak and ache were going wrong.

But none could love you like I did
Or father things like I have made
Life's song is over, decaying tune,
A half-remembered serenade.
If I should die
Think only this of me:
The shallow, ugly parts are gone
What remains is truly me:
The lives I touched. A soul that's free.

wolfie

@wolfie

The Octoberman. All I need is a bottle of Talisker, a keyboard and you. Facebook: Nikarkham www.nikarkham.co.uk

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Strong words

When I go man, I wanna go with no regrets...I know I've pissed off some and I know I've made others happy so it's swings and roundabouts really. 😠😿😊😺

Ahhh, so beautiful. Poetic, raw but finishes with a silky sense of peace and calm. Hmmm, maybe I was a sommelier in another life😉. Truly good write! ✨👏👏👏✨

I nice thing to read before I go to bed, nice one mate 😃

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This is awesome.

Excellent mate!

I love this, it is so...... Beautiful is the only word I can think of, although that doesn't cover it! ☺

Last two lines are brilliant 💚

@Wolfie Wow, this is stunning 😊

This is ABSOBLUTELY FAB...a rather stunning write...brought a lump to my throat...GULP😢😢

"the cells of unborn memory" brilliant! Really likes this poem. Full of feeling. 💛

@Nom strong feelings. Thanks for commenting

@TheCodsPollocks ain't it always :-)

@ckahn wow... Your review was more poetic than my piece!

@glen cool.. Gnight mate!

@RichWithey lol.. Macabre is my middle name! Perhaps you've only read my fluffier ones :-)

@VikingHorn @bryanrobertheap cheers buddies. Thanks for commenting. It's a big boost

@crowncottage thanks... Glad you liked it

@naaviie aww ta Nic. Between you and @crowncottage and the others, I'm bright red!

@MrsS @misslittleDHP thanks so much to both of you for your comments... They keep me going!

@jojo72 thanks! Was thinking about how old and flawed I am and then decided to write it. Glad you like :-)

No-one's mentioned Rupert Brooke yet.. The first two lines are an ironic use of his words.

Ha ha. Hardly, but you're sweet for saying so 😍

@wolfie Who's Rupert Brooke?

As you should be! 💚

@naaviie I should be red more often?

@Nom he's a poet writing during World War I. The lines I used are from his poem 'The Soldier'

@ckahn Sweet? Really? I look more like a sweaty submariner than someone who's sweet

@wolfie Now you say that, I DID know that (not lying to save face!).

@Nom I get that too. Buried knowledge

This is really stunning, a beautiful write! 🌹😄

@IndiaSparrow thanks so much :-)

@rachrocksdotcom thanks for reposting this :-)

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