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Death Secrets

The promises died in his icy white breath,
His eyes glazed glass -lucid looks bereft.
His smile upturned with a broken breath caught
Mid-sentence -did he part, those secrets untaught.
My hands clenched, claws digging in my sin,
I crashed onto him -tidal waves floored me in.
Plummeted my fists cold-hard-maddening
Not a word he uttered -but for his hairs abuse-filled mutterings.

~ Copyright Β© Ozlem Yikici 06.03.2013

-This is an iffy ending, I may edit it later -right now I'm just coming up with blanks, feels like it's not quite the last sentence it needs to be.

yikici

@yikici

#Worldsapart #FridayFun Artist, Writer, Poet -above all a humanbeing trying to find a way in this world by keeping to morals values and ethics as a guide to do good. YA writer & author of a selection of short stories, flash fictions, poems & blog articles. I'm here to share my work & cascading thoughts, be it through blogs or comments on posts you share. I blog at http://www.yikici.co.uk/recent-news I'm contactable through: Twitter: ozlemyikici kik: doodllz my imagery can be sighted here: Instagram: yikici and on my blog http://www.yikici.co.uk wattpad: yikici

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Comments & Feedback (3)

@sian_ @RichWithey 'tis the best I can come up with this prompt. πŸ˜πŸ’πŸ˜˜βœ¨

Fantastic. πŸ‘

@Jamtots thank you β˜ΊπŸ’βœ¨

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