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Broken Promises

The promises died in his icy white breath
He pointed at me with his fingers of death

There was something about him, the way that he moved
I remembered him last year, he hadn't improved

The way that he stumbled over little things
Pocket full of money, and a hand full of rings

His promises were broken
His last word spoken

He pointed right at me
And in his eyes I could see

A hatred so powerful, it burned his eyes bright
It was easy to see in the dim light

A hatred so meaningful, I'd be killed tonight
But I knew I'd do it, I'd put up a fight

His smile of beauty came out to play
His lips blueing, they brought me dismay

Hips that sway in the breeze, he knew how to move
He used to hold me tight and together we'd groove

But the promises died in his icy white breath
And that's how I remember my death

BethyBoo

@BethyBoo

18 year old student, loving opuss and the people I've met along the way <3 ... Kik: Bethlin

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@sian_ ๐Ÿ˜Š

Ooo good stuff Beth ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 glad you like it lee ๐Ÿ˜˜ thank you for the lovely repost ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘โค

@sammielee46 thank you for the repost Sammie ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜โค

Wow that's amazing Beth ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

@sian_ glad it's okay ๐Ÿ˜˜

Excellent Beth ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

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@sjw @LiSaC64 thank you both and for the lovely reposts ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘โค

@sarahgamal thank you for the lovely repost ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜โค

@RichWithey thank you for the lovely repost hun ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

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