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Carnival Mirror

In my dream I'm sitting in a room,
The claustrophobic walls resemble a tomb,
For as far as I can see there is no door,
So I sit aimlessly on the concrete floor,
In the deafening silence I have room to think,
This dream has no meaning and I find no link.

Then I see, the once solid concrete walls begin to morph and change,
The size and the height start to rearrange,
That's when I notice the rectangular shape of glass infront of me,
A girl facing me is all I can see,
She appears to be crying,
And her soul is slowly dying.

She has a plump belly and an ugly face,
She wears a pretty dress made with intricate lace,
I move to comfort her,
The same time her image begins to stir,
And as I lift my arm she does so too,
And I cant help but think we're rather alike me and you,
I wonder if your like me on the inside,
So afraid of what people think-that all you want to do is hide,
If only everyone had the same outer shell,
Then nobody would have to live a life of consistent hell,
Everyone would see that personality should be viewed as something much dearer,
And this I believe, is the beauty of a carnival mirror.

Bronwyn_morrison

@Bronwyn_morrison

Hey, I'm 15 and I like to write :)

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Comments & Feedback (15)

This is really good! Love the message ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

Thank you :) @gazplend

@Bronwyn_morrison my pleasure,more like this please! Brilliant ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

Haha will do! And thanks for the repost :) @gazplend

This is awesome love it ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ‘

Thank you :) @sjw

Excellent write. ๐Ÿ‘

Thanks :) @eddie12309

Well done :)

Thank you :)@AJBrown

This is amazing. I love the last line and how it draws the end so well... it's like that "aha!" moment. Very clever and very good!!!

Yeah that's exactly what I was going for :) thanks @moonlightforestfairy

You're welcome! Excellent job!

@Bronwyn_morrison really good! Love how your message comes through throughout the poem, but we only realise at the end... Amazing :)

Haha thanks so much :) @efflorecence

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