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Invisible Is Me

Can you hear my voice
Do you know my face
Do you know my words
Or am I merely waste
Will I ever shine
Will people know my name
Will I ever be proud
Or hang my head with shame
Can I be right here
Sitting quietly still
No words to be spoken
Just a space to fill
Interesting I am not
But I really try to be
To stand up and be seen
Instead of invisible is me

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (25)

Wow really hit Me! Good powerful writing

I can see you 😜

We can all see you hun x

This is truly blinding!

Thank you all for the fab comments....you can feel invisible at times though cant you?

Oh yes I do know the feeling!

@simplystylish...great not just me then lol :):)

@munford...thankayooooo for the lovely repost:):):)

@misslittleDHP deserved

Felt this way many times. Struggle against it but that darn cloak of invisibility isn't easy to let go of.

Know the feeling πŸ˜” love this post very well written 😘

Nobody can do everything. Lol guess again vus u are nobody d:D

@aleishagayle20 @melody THANKYOU lovely ladies...I wrote that on one of my down days when I was feeling sorry for myself, how I felt ignored or overlooked by those around me...feels good to get it off my chest...thanks for the sweet comments

@misslittleDHP know the feeling opuss is like a therapy for me I love it a place where I can be me and not called a freak or weird not invisible on here babe your a talented writer and we love you 😘😘😘

@aleishagayle20 aww coming from you that means a lot thanks sweetie xxxx

This is good stuff great style I'm relating to this I get the feeling everyday πŸ˜”

Thanks for the repost my lovely...glad you like it...we all have dark days but thankfully not all the time, for me anyway...writing is my release!!

@melody apologies earlier I realised I put THANKYOU lovely ladies...lol

@misslittleDHP why cant everyone realize im a guy 😰

@melody ha ha bless you...I did know...just got happy tapping real quick...and lovely ladies is just one of my sayings, sometimes I say it without thinking...if its makes you feel better I can smell your testosterone from here tee hee!

@misslittleDHP lol xP im not that much of a fuy to feel better with that xD

@misslittleDHP lol from me ☺ I'm just me nothing more babe πŸ˜„ and no problem babe was good post 😘

@sjw...thanks for the RP...my sweet xxx

@misslittleDHP your welcome loving your posts😽😽

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