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Journey To What Will Be

I hope you make mistakes like me,
On your journey to what will be.
Some will cost you dearly,
Others help see clearly,
All are necessary on your journey to what will be.

I hope you find out who you are,
Learn from mistakes and you'll go far.
Do not feel defeated,
By mistakes that are repeated,
Know yourself and you will be someone else's star.

I hope you make mistakes because you try,
No need to cover them, do not lie.
You are human so will err,
Those that say they don't beware,
On the shoulders of past attempts you fly.

Tend not to judge others on their mistakes,
Rather on the amends they make.
It takes a heart of gold,
To bring in from the cold,
Forgive but don't forget, it's the best for your own sake.

I hope you make mistakes like me,
On your journey to what will be.
Some will cost you dearly,
Others help see clearly,
All are necessary on your journey to what will be.

Burrfoot

@Burrfoot

Getting there, one step at a time

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Comments & Feedback (13)

@glen .. Think I've done better, but this is one of the few I think about and connect with and know off by heart.. So it's prob one of my favourites .. Gonna post a story one up later when I find it, if I may

Lovely! I've always firmly believed that God loves that we're "sinners"! Otherwise, how would we become better and have compassion? A poem that CELEBRATES mistakes! I love itπŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

@Burrfoot - Hats off, striking poem which many can relate to :)

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Brilliant πŸ‘πŸ‘

I make more mistakes than most lol excellent mate πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘

@ckahn we all make them and if you don't you ain't trying πŸ˜‰ ty

@Hauxstar2013 @leelee101 @sarahgamal thanks peeps, appreciated

@glen I make them.. But I'm hardly ever wrong πŸ˜‰

Wonderful piece Hun πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘βœ¨β€πŸ‘

Ty you muchly @misslittleDHP πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ

Brilliant Burr & full of truths. One I'll be reading to my girls - & definitely one of your best πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜˜

@Fly10 a very touching compliment that has made my day, that someone would share something I have written with someone else, let alone your kids πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

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