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Ace Of Hearts 2

In reply to @Weirdwolf

He came over to my table as I shuffled all the cards,
He asked me how to play because the game looked hard.
I can teach you the game if you'd like me to,
But whether you'll be lucky well, that is up to you
He smiled and he thanked me as I laid him down his hand
He looked confused but smiled said he wanted to win a grand
I laughed and lowered my eyes as I felt myself go red
It shouldn't be like this, I should be professional instead.
He said So this game is really a lot of luck and fun,
All I've got to do is make twenty one?
The money kept on coming as the cards went his way
Speechless was how I was, I didn't know what to say!
When he left I thanked him as he tipped me some chips
Then I saw the smile that slowly formed on his lips.
He asked Can I have your number? We can go and have some fun
I looked at him and smirked
'When you make twenty one'

Cinders

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Ha ha! Brilliant :)

Lmfao that was awesome and well played lol

A good teplyπŸ‘

@smellyfingers Well Played indeed :D

@Weirdwolf @TheViolator @smellyfingers heh heh - those sort of comments make my night ;) always good for banter on the tables

@Weirdwolf not bad considering I only had ten mins to write it lol

@Cinders I was thinking that myself :) Bloody good come back ;)

@Weirdwolf lol, I'm well known for being quick witted ;) it was nice that you wrote something I could relate to

@Cinders what a comeback! Great stuff

@leelee101 why thank you :) I do try lol

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