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Sorrowful

Lately she's been trying
To be better but it's hard
Through all your crying.
After all you've fought
She feels bad now,
She realizes she's all you got.
Says it's over, a few weeks later
Now you won't stop saying
How much you hate her.
So now you're out to kill.
But my dear,
It seems you've lost the will,
Knowing she's about to undress,
For a better man.
I see your utter bitterness.
You've fallen down.
In a sea of sadness,
You're about to drown.
But before you go under,
You scream her name
And it echoes like thunder.
Impossible to ignore,
I know that she heard it.
As you fell to the floor.

ClaireTilley

@ClaireTilley

Um not really sure what to say..

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@leelee thanks for the repost!

@candy_massacre thank for the repost!

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@skinnyassbitch I added stuff to it, do you like it?

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@skinnyassbitch thanks! And thanks for the honest criticism!

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