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Davedave16
Davedave16 • 170 followers

Ok. So it has taken me a while and I finally realised why I chose lust as my word. Its something I usually wouldn't look for. That made it extra tricky for all who entered to make me read on. So, now time for the results.
In third place...

@Janflower ! For your very thought provoking piece. Well done

In second is...

@ren360 for your beautiful piece if writing

And now, the moment you've been waiting for...
The winner of the contest is...
(insert drumroll here)

@KANS for your beautifully written piece and for reminding us that not all poetry has to rhyme in each line! I salute you.

Special thanks to
@jan3601 @AWriterGirl and last but certainly not least @LittleMissSam for entering! Everyone's pieces were so well written, it was really difficult to choose.

It was a hard deduction but now, I (not so) reluctantly pass on the burden to @KANS

I'm sorry for the huge delay but opuss keeps deleting my final version of this

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Davedave16

@Davedave16

If life is an open door, why am I always trapped on the outside. With all this space around me and no where to go, no one to share it with. The cruel and unforgiving darkness becomes a blessing and my mind blurs the lines that others have set in place for me. I am at one with my self. I am at one with others. I am at one with the darkness. I am at one with the unknown.

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Comments & Feedback (22)

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:17 PM

@jan3601 @AWriterGirl @LittleMissSam @KANS @ren360 @janflower

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:29 PM

Gahh it only shows third place

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:30 PM

@AWriterGirl I noticed and have now uploaded the final bit!!

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:31 PM

@AWriterGirl opuss deleted mt final version twice so I had to rewrite it twice 😔

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:32 PM

@Davedave16 ooh I see :)

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:32 PM

Congrats to all winners!!

LittleMissSam
LittleMissSam
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:33 PM

Congrats everyone:)

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:35 PM

@LittleMissSam @AWriterGirl I have just edited it as I remembered a bit more!

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:36 PM

Congratulation to all who entered

Janflower
Janflower
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:37 PM

Thank you very much, very happy with 3rd!! Well done @ren360 and @KANS !

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:37 PM

@Davedave16 nothing is added? As of now. I'll go refresh

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:38 PM

@AWriterGirl look at the new sentence right after the special thanks

KANS
KANS
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:39 PM

@Davedave16 wow, thank you! I was not expecting to win. And well done to everyone else who entered!! 👏👏

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:40 PM

@KANS yours and everyone else's pieces were amazing but for me, it was how you didn't rhyme the last line of each stanza that was the icing on the cake

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:41 PM

@LittleMissSam your piece was especially unique because it was a story, and no one else wrote one :D

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:41 PM

@Janflower @KANS @ren360 good job you guys!! :) just read your entries and they were awesome :) you deserved to win!

AWriterGirl
AWriterGirl
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:41 PM

@Davedave16 ooh I see I read it before you added the comment haha

KANS
KANS
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:46 PM

@Davedave16 thank you 😊

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 7:47 PM

@jan3601 your bribe of air wasn't good enough!!! (jk he didn't bribe me)

LittleMissSam
LittleMissSam
Sep 12, 2012 at 8:17 PM

@Davedave16 Thankyou:) That means alot to me!My songs and poems never come out right, I really feel me when I do stories:) That piece was actually about two characters I've been writing about for months:)

Davedave16
Davedave16
Sep 12, 2012 at 8:32 PM

@LittleMissSam it was a great story! Anyone who reads this should check it out

ren360
ren360
Sep 12, 2012 at 9:33 PM

Welll done everyone!!

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