Bus, seats upright,
Busy, bumping ride,
Seatbelt too tight,
Passengers being snide,
The stuffy bus air,
Drivers road rage,
Doesn't give a care,
Like being stuck in a cage,
Coughing behind and in front,
Sneezing here and there,
The feeling you want to jump,
Really jump anywhere,
Still it's cheap,
And if you get a seat,
Its good enough for me!
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