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Rock Bottom

How a stumble can't be a fall,
How a smile can't be just that,
How sudden you hit the wall,
And you feel as small as a rat,

I tripped and fell in line with you,
And your dark eyes stared,
We both didn't know what to do,
When the fate of love dared,

But then I saw you smiling,
And your lips were what I did need,
But then my guilt was piling,
Just how big was my greed,

But then I hit rock bottom,
And all I could do was laugh,
After all, I was so rotten,
So I took my life with a scarf.

Was a love poem, but I though that was more dramatic!
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Diddle

@Diddle

!!!! www.happycows.eu. Helo! ร‡a Va? The name's Dana, Dana Dana, (Day.na). I'm 13, come from a big family of very... loud people, despite that I am quiet, and keep to myself. I like spongebob (He made me who I am today.) I usually write poems, sometimes a story, and blogs if I'm lacking in poetry ideas. 'One can be addicted to a certain type of sadness' unknown person, please stop writing about me. ยกยกยกยก

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