plip, plop,
you're filled with doubt
your knife lies bloodied
your skin's stained red
your wrists sit slit
you might as well be dead
the cuts release a river
that rushes out of you
the blood won't stop
and it doesn't plan to
the pain is great
but not quite enough
you take it a step further
because things are so rough
sticky red ooze
oh, how it flows
you're motionless now
and there your life goes.
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Drip, drop, Drip, drop. The rain on my roof will not stop. Each tiny drop of rain, Makes me wince with horrid pain. The memory of you, Hurts my heart.
Deep scars she hides No war she has seen, These wounds spring forth From thoughts so unclean, They declare her repulsive That she is unfit, So she makes true these words With a knife and a slit.
Go to sleep and close you're eyes, and dream of broken butterfly's. That tore there wings against a thorn, you know the pain that they have endured.
@misslittleDHP 's improv challenge... Words: alone, think, tree, wind, bare, tense. The need to be alone encompasses me, While I sit beneath this old oak tree.
Is this the part where I try to tell a funny joke to break the ice. I proceed by telling you all about my childhood and how much I hated life. Or should I tell you about all the times I felt alone.
Once upon a screwed up life, Drugs, abuse, And bloody knifes. Once upon a midnight fair, Moon aglow, It's skin so fair. Once upon a lovers kiss, A meeting, midnight A mornings bliss.
Shimmer shimmer bleeding black star,. I wish I'd know where you are,. I need a wish to help me out,. In my dark world full of doubt,. Shimmer shimmer bleeding black star,.
I like razor blades. I like how shiny they are. How the light reflects off them. How elegant yet deadly the tip is. I like razor blades. I like how they feel in my hand. Delicate and light.
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