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Corrupted Shadow

My soul is blackened,
Dark like an eclipse of the sun.
I wish it'd never happened,
My life, it used to be fun.

Before this I was just your average child,
Messing around with a grin,
Wherever I went, I laughed and smiled,
As if a frown was a deadly sin.

That blissful state, it didn't last long,
All thanks to the people I know,
But even then I sung a cheerful song,
And didn't let the sadness show.

Then one sunny day I was confined to my room,
Sure that nobody cared.
I promised myself I would end it soon,
Convinced myself I wasn't scared.

My feet dangled from the window ledge,
My head was dizzy from the height,
I slowly pushed closer to the edge,
I'd be in a better place by tonight.

Before I could do what I wanted so badly,
A shout came from behind.
I couldn't just end it and die, sadly.
Why is peace so hard to find?

My parents screamed as if my plight was a crime,
My sister just stood and laughed.
I told them I was fine.
I should've known they weren't daft.

They locked my window,
I sat and cried.
I couldn't end it,
Why couldn't I have died?

I'd just like to inform you that this is all 100% true. I feel a little better confiding this to you all.

Earthbound

@Earthbound

14 years old. Female. British. Likes to rhyme. Is addicted to Teh Internetz.

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Comments & Feedback (14)

I'm glad you feel better, writing is a therapy x

What happened?

I'd had a bad day at school with bullies and stuff, and when I came home my mum basically said she didn't care about me. My sister said she didn't either. I just felt like I'd be doing them a favour.

I do know How it feels trust Me , But also trust in My words, it does get Better promise

@simplystylish I'm hoping that. I use my iPod to go online. I'm a lot more liked online.

Well it might feel like that, But dont miss out on nice people irl ,,, they are out there, But somtimes hard to find, i know hope You feel Better now?

@Earthbound well that's a load of bollocks, no-ones better off without someone!

@meganelisabeth I ruin people's lives. I know I do.

@Earthbound be miserable then, that kind of attitude is self destructing, it took me many years and a lot of therapy to change how I thought, and I can't stand people who insist on ridiculous things! Cheer up lol

@meganelisabeth I'll just shut up. I know I'm annoying you. I annoy everyone.

@Earthbound you're daft :)

Hi, I've been browsing around and lovipoems, you have a talent and just a word on the subject your feelings are very similar to those I and some if my friends went through at the same age,I am not patronising you I promise but trust me roll through it now keep doing the things you live and trust that every frustrateing thing that happens to you is given you even more soul for when u are a 'grown up'. Despite how you feel somtimes this does pass and if you stick to your passions now you'll be prepareung yourself for some amazeing stuff ahead. Those who don't struggle turn out to be the boreing fucks trust me :)

@wonder Thanks

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