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The Card Player. :)

PLEASE READ THIS AND GIVE ME YOUR OPINION! :) xx -Emily xx

You played me for years,
Time and time again.
Could you not have left the deck,
And saved me all the pain.

You always took another card,
Never happy with what you had.
Someone's heart would always break,
But somehow you were glad.

And when you tried to explain,
You said I became the provoker.
Yet all along I chose the card,
Which turned out to be the joker.

I loved you lots I swear I did,
From the deepest of my heart,
But knowing that, I see horror,
I'm so thankful we're apart.

I plead that the next girl,
Will escape while she can.
Anyone can do better than you,
'cos you're a lying, deceitful man.

Why aren't I the one,
That you will always pick?,
Instead you shuffle me around,
Like some naive old card trick.

Emily_InspiresAll

@Emily_InspiresAll

Just some naive teenage girl writing poems with no confidence... O_o Ed sheeran, the hunger games, all time low, the midnight beast and other stuff is basically my life. Ps I'm sorry I'm not good at being sociable. :)

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Comments & Feedback (16)

WOW!! Five star!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

This is brill!

Thank you! :) glad someone likes it.. :/ x

This is really good, so much depth to it as well. Really good write👌👍

This is fabulossa...clever little write...fab👍👌👍💗💚💗

Anything mentioning poker gets my vote 😜 seriously though 👏

It's an excellent piece, both in the expression of feeling & the concept of card player, which was executed brilliantly 👏😌

Excellent stuff. Agree with Fly using the cards as a metaphor was very clever. 🌟🌟🌟🌟✨

This is a right Royal Flush! Excellent! ♠♥♣♦

@TheCodPollocks haha I like what you did there! :) @Fly10 @eddie12309 @eddie12309 @TheCodsPollocks @eddie12309 @Fly10 thank you for thinking so.. I thought I'd try something a little less direct. @Burrfoot haha!! ☺ thanks x @misslittleDHP aaawww thanks!! 😊💓@Stablish and lastly thank you.. That means a lot to me! 😊

Sorry I don't know why it tagged you so many times?! :S x

Very cleverly written. Great job!

@bryanrobertheap thanks!! 😉

Brilliant! Well written❤

Brilliant!!

Thank you so much!! 😊@nesecool

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