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Room Thirty-Three

Prologue
The old stairs creaked underneath Delias feet. She finally reached the top and sighed. Fargone hotel was not the best hotel she'd ever stayed in. She looked at her room key. Room 32 it said in swirly black letters. She unlocked her door and stepped inside. Expecting it to be nothing like it was she gasped. A large bed with clean white sheets, a desk with writing paper, envelopes and pens and a mirrored dressing table. A cupboard with 10 hangers in it sat in the corner. Another door led to the bathroom, which had a shower a sink and a toilet. She put her suitcase under her bed. Even though the room was cold and smelt too strongly of lavender, she didn't mind it. Well not to much. She pushed her blonde hair behind her ears and her green eyes grew wide. She put on a red hoodie and picked up her book Which was on her bed were she'd thrown it. She read about 1 chapter more ( chapter 7) and was startled by her phone ringing. She picked it up and looked at the screen. It was Sofia, her friend. Sofia was tall and pale with red hair and a name that no one else she new had. She knew lots of Sophie's and Sophia's but Sofia's name was pronounced So-fy-a. Delia pressed accept and said
" hey Sofia!"
"Hi. How's the hotel?" Delia paused. Then.
" it's... Different. It's horrible but the room isn't too bad."
"Yea?"
Sofia said. Delia could hear clicking in the background, an obvious sign that Sofia was in Facebook.
"Yeah it is really bad."
Delia felt kinda pissed that Sofia was not that interested. She knew that Sofia was about to say something like 'Whatever so did you hear...' Or 'Ok. I was told...' Or something like that.
However Sofia said
" em I gotta tell you something. I was just googling it and... Fargone hotel is meant to have a kind of... Bad history. Like murder. In 1966. Some girl died and a ghost is meant to haunt it. Just be careful. I gotta go."
Too stunned at Sofia's sudden caring, delia just ended the call and sighed. Ghost weren't real. But as she slept that night she was woken up by a scream. It came from the room next door. She went over. It was unlocked. Room 33. She read. She stepped in side bit looked the same as room 32. But then a girl in a white dress with Brown hair appeared screaming. Too shocked to move, Delia stood there. The girl ran towards her and twisted Delias neck around so that it snapped. Delias lifeless body fell to the floor. The girl disappeared into the shadows. Miles away, Sofia sat in her room, and was sure as hell that Delia had not listened to her.

Thanx. Ill post more out later. Sorry it was a long prologue.
Emma
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Hey!!!!!!!! Hope you like. Sorry it was soo long but it wasn't meant to be a main story part, just a bit for the general bit of room 33

I liked it! Just make sure you use the correct form of "too". You might want to include a little more detail about the appearance of the hotel to create a more chilling scene! But come check out my piece

@sammantin ok I will! To is like 'I'm going to' and too is like 'me too' right. Ill add a descriptive part in chapter one. Ill check out ur thing.

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