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A Date With Destiny

(modern day take on the wonderful tale by Sergei Prokofiev)

Once upon a time, a little boy named Peter
(who for reasons which are not very plain)
Embarked on a path of treacherous deceit
In a desperate bid for a moment of fame

In the dark of the night his story was born
He created his very own 'Wolf''
Safe in the knowledge that in his sad cyber world
It would be difficult for peers to find proof

The boy warned all the good people
Of this prowling beast
How it seemed it was him he was after!
The wolf was vicious, he wrote,
Peter's days were numbered
And his world was now empty of laughter

The good people in town mustered up strong support-
One by one they gathered around
And promised the boy they would help him to fight
The dreaded curse of this poisonous hound!

Flattered by the attention and hungry for more
Peter's beast grew and grew every day
The boy begged the people to stay by his side-
To follow his story and to pray

But of course, in his world, the wolf wasn't real
What an elaborate web he had weaved!
Peter had to think quick, to free himself from these lies
To backtrack from all those he'd deceived

Realising too late, the error of his ways
Peter tried to undo what was done
Out loud he thanked God!
And told all that could hear
That the Beast, had for now, turned and gone!

Some felt they'd been duped, others just felt sorry....
Some of the good people stayed true
Found it hard to believe after all that poor Peter
Would do that to me and to you?

Take heed all that read, of the sting in the tail
For all those who concoct such a lie
What goes around, comes around
As poor Peter found-
His fate is above you and I

For I heard that this story, had a twist in the end
It seems the Devil was involved in the deal
And some time later, when all was quiet...
Satan came calling-
And Peter discovered his fake Wolf was quite real....

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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I love this!

Brilliant rhythm, great feeling and highly applicable. Fab work Leigh πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

Very good choice my lovely. Excellent write πŸ’šπŸ‘πŸ˜”πŸ˜˜

πŸ‘ in a metaphorical nutshell πŸ‘πŸ‘ brilliant

Oh Leigh that's very good... πŸΊπŸΊπŸΊπŸ‘πŸ˜‚β€πŸ˜˜

@DierBeatrixx Thank you lady 😌

@naaviie Glad you liked itπŸ˜‰ Will catch up on your posts when I've chance lady😘

@eddie12309 @Burrfoot After observing with interest from afar, I was presented with inspiration 😌 Will catch up on your posts in full when I've chance. Thanks for your comments 😘

@leelee101 Only a fool invites fate through the door....but we all know that-don't we? Glad you liked & sorry I've missed a few of yours-will catch up properly when I can 😘x

Brilliant write πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€πŸ’—πŸ˜˜

@Fly10 ok hunny speak soon πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@minxyMolly Thank you lady πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

Brilliantly written, this is the first Opuss I've read since early this morning, so I'm dreading what I'm going to find. Your metaphorical warning is far more eloquent than my own 'frog' poem!

@Fly10 what a truly spectacular write...superb lovely ladyπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

I really am in awe with how well this is expressed! I'll stop rereading it now haha. Thanks, that is so sweet but please feel no obligation πŸ’šπŸ˜˜βœ¨β€

Utterly brilliant! I love the original story, but this surpasses it. And so apt for now! Bravo!! πŸ‘πŸ‘β€πŸŒŸ

@jojo72 @misslittleDHP Thank you both for your lovely comments. Just glad you both enjoyed & 'got' it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜˜xx

@naaviie Wouldn't miss them lady😘

@Nom As you've probably read, I've only been dipping in & out when I can, & have observed with interest the events unfolding in some areas! This just seemed an apt way to portray my feelings. I WILL read your pieces thoroughly-I'm know they'll be inspiring as always 😌😘

@Fly10 I know you will read them, I do believe you when you say you will! No need for repetition!

@Nom Sorry sir (hangs head...) 😞

@Fly10 chin up, I'm only teasing :)

@Nom Me tooπŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

Outstanding write πŸ‘

Nice

@sb2uk @glen Thank you both 😊

@Fly10 bloody marvellous as usual Leigh, me loved it πŸ’πŸ˜˜

@smellyfingers Thank you babe 😘😘😘

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