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A Marathon Won

This Sunday night feeling
Just getting me down
Another Monday calling
So quick to come around
But got no choice
No money=
No food
Still doesn't help
To lift my mood
I don't want to wish
My life away
Spending every minute
Dreaming of Friday
Perhaps I should
Sell up and rent?
A lottery win
Would be heaven sent
So to lift my spirits
I stop, look around
And remind myself
That all I want-
I've found
A man who loves me
Friends who care
People with whom I can
Laugh and share
A cat, a dog
A shit hot bike
Even the in laws, I rather like
And peeping round the bedroom door
Sleeping, two little girls
I couldn't love more
With all this in mind, I can take the world on!
Forget the Monday to Friday
Marathon.

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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@leelee101 This isn't my fun one by the way! πŸ˜‰

@Fly10 very touching babe 😘

Congratulations on the victory!

@VikingHorn Why thank you! It's a marathon not a sprint as 'they' say..πŸ˜‰

@smellyfingers Thank you kind sir. Didn't finish the way I intended when I started it, but sometimes things just take you over 😌😘 Repost much appreciated 😊😚

@Fly10 pleasure babe! All mine never finish how I intend, half the time I have no idea what I'm going to write, I just wrote and let it all out, start with an idea or a line or 2 and just go with it, as it were. This ended very well tho 😘

@smellyfingers I'm exactly the same. At times I have a clear theme, but others, I just see where it takes me. I've refrained now from re-reading/altering too, as can drive myself bonkers procrastinating...just hit send instead πŸ˜‰

@VikingHorn Appreciate repost-thank you 😘

@Fly10 haha no I don't re-read to edit, only to try and check spelling mistakes ect. Have also stopped myself from thinking as I tend to lose the words/idea due to short term memory lose (old age lol 😁), best to think while writing I guess. The posts that come out in 1 go from start to finish are quite satisfying I find 😘

@smellyfingers Don't even start me on grammar etc...don't mind others mistakes but harsh on myself! A trait I irritate myself with no end πŸ˜– The pieces I write that tend to take more time & thought, are the more personal ones. Past heartbreaks, hurt etc, places in my mind I only revisit when the mood is right ie when it doesn't hurt as much. So I concur-the quick flow ones are def easier!😌 P.S And re memory? I wrote notes ALL the time. Even then, I sometimes refer back & haven't a f***ing clue what I meant when I wrote it!πŸ˜„

@Fly10 write notes (see what I mean?!)

@smellyfingers write notes (see what I mean?!)

All so true, couldn't have said it better. Awesome!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΆ

@Lovinmalamutes Thank you-glad you like it😊😚

@Fly10 Hahahaha my grammar is very poor as is my English (dyslexia plays havoc with "they're, their, too, to ect" as does these ; : ' ect being illiterate doesn't help either I guess Lmfao. But I just give it a go and have fun and will write about anything altho, appreciate some areas are just too "raw" hahaha I look back a read some of my older posts and think wtf?? Haha I too used to keep some notes but as said I prefer to just write as and when now. πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@Fly10 That ran well πŸ‘ nice 🌹

@TheViolator Glad you liked it & thanks for comment 😌😘

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