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Love Is A Stranger

I used to love a man like you
Fought for him like
a soldier
over every other woman
But still his heart grew colder

With clarity I remember him
Caressing...
Undressing me
Can still taste our lovemaking in my mouth
So wild, intense
and free
And the pain it tears my soul apart, at that
exquisite memory

So tonight, stay with me?
Just until the dark is over
I'm merely a stop off on your way-
I know I'm not your lover
Don't try to use me and
please, don't refuse me-
I'll never ask for less
or more
You have this chance to win or lose me
Isn't that what you came here for?
So why now are you
So subdued
Lurking in my doorway?
You chose your fate long before
You came upon my highway.

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (29)

Love this 😊 so sad

@Delilah Thank you. Glad the essence of it came across 😔

I love this to pieces xx

Love this agree sad but beautifully written think we've all been there 😔 but great stuff 😊

@Fly10 💙

Very sad, I know how it could be though, sort of. Perhaps he thought he wanted it and then changed his mind, possibly got caught up trying to make his dreams happen. You have put me under pressure with this reading request.lol All I can say is thank god I have not had that many relationships as an adult, hopefully I never do that. Wasn't sure if you just wanted a poem review, if so its a really good poem.

@lonelynutmeg98 Megan, thank you😌

Wow.. So melancholic😳

@Fly10 excellent. Really great work. 😊

Beautiful Hun!😍

@Stablish (smiling) no pressure intended...interested as to how it comes across is all. When you write something, you know exactly what you are attempting to portray. Obviously each reader then interprets it differently, perhaps depending purely on whether they can relate to it, or simply like the language/flow. Was curious as to how you saw it-or perhaps it depends on which Stablish reads it?! On my dark days I certainly read things differently....👿😡😂...but mostly it's 😁 Thanks Mr 😉

@ashhkat 😔😊

@aleishagayle20 Thank you-glad you related in some way 😌

@stolenhearts @stablish Repost much appreciated-big thanks 😌

@DuRoLuRo Yeah...let the mood take me on this one😔

@michga Thank you v.much 😌x

@leelee101 Much appreciated & glad you approve😌

@michga @AlisaPerne Big thanks for repost😚

@Fly10 Well it's something a lot of people could relate to I guess I have anyway so I love it great stuff 😘

@Fly10 yeah I have dark days, had a bit of a moment earlier. But Thsnks to a good friend on here earlier I managed to overcome it. I always read things from my perspective, not always for the best admittedly, but probably helps my poetry. Keep up the good work.😊

@aleishagayle20 I guess you're right-no one gets they life without perhaps feeling this way at least once 😓 Thanks for feedback 😚

(meant gets 'through' life-I hate this keyboard)

@Fly10 😘 it's okay babe

@aleishagayle20 (I meant gets 'through' life-I hate this keypad😠)

@Fly10 no worries, your welcome x

:) it's sad but nice! <3 my favourite piece :)

@Tippette Thank you!😊 Glad you liked it😉

@Fly10 beautiful. And I completely, utterly know how this feels. Why does love and life have to be so difficult? 💔

Brilliant writing, all the ingredients, straight from the heart and your head...

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