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Reason

In a way I could never have known
The seed of our love has grown

And like a rare egg held in hands
Against all odds withstands

My emotion no longer controlled
As by you, I am enthralled

Your gentle touch, familiar smell
Mean any doubts you soon dispel

Time and again my heart will yield
Just as swaying grass in poppy fields...

Is indebted to nature and the seasons
To my life, you brought a reason.

Improvisation challenge utilising; egg, hands, emotion, smell, poppy & grass @eddie12309

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

Fly10

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Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (30)

@eddie12309 😌😘

Aww so sweet 😊

@Delilah Thank you lady 😘

@Delilah Thank you lady😘 and v.grateful for repost😊

That's very nice, well done you! 😊

@crowncottage Thank you! Glad you liked it 😊😘

Awww beautiful hun 😍😘

@smellyfingers Thank you & RP appreciated 😘

@Fly10 lovely hun. Very well done 👍😘

Really lovely😊😚

Oh this is just lovely too. Love the imagery. 😊

@Stablish Glad you liked it & big😘 for RP. Hope you're well & life is good😌❤

@eddie12309 Thank you-great challenge 😉😄😘

@gazplend Much obliged for RP 😊😘😘🐦

Yeah apart from work, had bad writers block too, but still happy so can't be all bad. Will be back at it soon😊

@Stablish Look forward to it😘☀

@Fly10 your worth it! 👍😍🐦

Beautiful!! 💚

Beautiful

@naaviie @Nom Thank you both😊😘

@Fly10 you're welcome...feel free to look at my attempt at improv!

@Nom I ALWAYS check your work-wouldn't miss it😌 Only dipped in & out of my feed today as hectic, so got lots to catch up on. Will def read tho 😌😘

@Fly10 :) wow thank you 😊, I too am having trouble keeping up with my feed!

@Nom I know the site is under development, but I think it would be really useful if reposts didn't appear in your feed, if it's someone you're already following. I sometime, as I'm sure you do, often end up scrolling through the same post again & again, meaning I sometimes stuff. I think the concept of reposts is great, but perhaps need a tweak as & when resources allow😌

@Nom Please ignore any grammatical errors! A correction option for comments would be GREAT!😄😉

@Fly10 I partly agree with you. However, I often miss posts posted during the day as I can only come on with wifi access (iPod not iPhone) and it takes forever to scroll through the feed. Therefore it is quite handy when somebody saves me the effort of looking by reposting! I do agree with you point though as it would reduce the feed; however Opuss is still young!

@Nom I miss posts too, as often have days I can't check in until the evening. I find I miss earlier stuff for the exact reason you say-my feed overloads & constantly flits back to the top, so takes forever to reach the early ones. As we have said though, the app is young & these are minor narks. Feed going bonkers tonight tho-nursery rhymes have got everyone's juices flowing!😄😉😘

@Fly10 I know. I love it when everyone jumps onto a theme! We do seem to have had a bit of a 'themed' overload recently however!

@Nom I agree...it's excellent fun, but sometimes overdone & depth of writing is lost a little. I think we're being overloaded due to it being strangely quiet on Opuss in last 24hrs or so. It's certainly fixed that!😉😄

@Fly10 :)

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