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Final Phone Call.

A poem based upon the 9/11 bombings.

I'm standing on the top floor,
The other floors are gone,
Of survivors in this tower,
I'm the only one.

I know that I will die here,
So quickly 'fore I go,
I need to call my family-
I just want them to know...

Today something has happened,
A plane had burnt my work,
I'm teetering on existence,
Just yonder death does lurk.

I have fifteen percent phone battery,
I wanted to call you,
To tell you how I love you all,
A feeling never new.

Along the city's skyline,
A crimson haze of ash,
And smoke is filling up the air,
And flesh is like a rash.

I have to watch them all die,
And know my time is here,
I love you all, my family-
Though yet my time is near.

The last thing to my brother:
I fought over the phone,
I'd like to say I'm sorry,
And don't feel so alone.

And to my parents, both,
I live you till I hurt,
For every important message,
For every Christmas shirt!

And to my little sister:
You're only seven now,
One day when you're older,
I know we'd have a row.

My battery is dying now:
And not just on my cell,
I love you all, my family,
There's not much more to tel-

HeatherAnne

@HeatherAnne

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Great stuff hunny. One of my cousins was due to have been in one of the towers on that day for a meeting, but it got rearranged, just always thankful I never had to take that call. 😢👏❤

That awkward moment when you start crying because your uncle died in 9/11 before you could even meet him...

@leelee101 lucky! 😥 thanks 😊@madhatter I did put a warning at the top of the piece 😥

@HeatherAnne he certainly was hun ❤

Lovely Tribute💙

@ashhkat thanks hun 💚

😢😢 we lived near Boston at this time. Knew several families who were effected. A coworker changed her flight out of Boston at the last minute- saved her life. This was so moving. Excellent piece.

@ckahn thank you. It was such a heart breaking situation - and those who did escape with their lives... Such luck. 💜

So hard hitting 💗 great write 🌷

Fantastic piece 😢👏👏👏🌹🌹🌹🌹😄😘😘

@PoppyA @minxyMolly thank you both 💜

So sad, heart breaking, but amazingly well written,😥

@cperry thank you 💜

Oh this brought a lump to my throat and a tear to my eye...soooo very emotional ❤💚💔💚❤

@misslittleDHP indeed :/ thank you 😊💙

@HeatherAnne so emotional brought tears to my eyes, we lost a dear family friend who had just started a new life out there. So well written 💗💐

@sara_lou oh no 😥 my thoughts are with you 😥 thanks though! 😊

I know, it's just glad to know that other people understand now :) @sara_lou @ckahn

@HeatherAnne @madhatter thanks ladies time is a great healer but there will always be the scar

@sara_lou 🌀True Dat🌀

This gave me chills!! X

@HeatherAnne when's the results?

@beckyboo130 thanks!

I've been inside the twin towers. Great write so sad ✈✈🌆🗽🌈

@glen wow! I'd be scared to, still 😥 thank you! 😊

@HeatherAnne not when it happened lol years before 😃🌆

@glen psychologically, I'd still be terrified :/

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