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HingAling24
HingAling24 • 220 followers

The bitter lies prevent our eyes from reading between the sordid lines

Failing at sight
Falling each time

Our eyes cry tears that painfully tear from the sides

I'm the chosen subject
Subjected to populate these foreign lies

Number after number the truth we seek to hide

Its no surprise
My minds reeling feeling number every time

I'm too close to close the doors upon the truth

Setting this free is like committing myself to a noose

I will always aim to find the truth

The poet is free

My tongue is loose

Daniel Hing 22.01.13

#existential-poetry #general #inner-struggle #psychological-exploration #self-reflection
HingAling24

@HingAling24

When I was dipped in the river Styx, no part of my body was missed, my thesis stressed Thetis did enlist a power unknown by man to exist........ Silly Achilles A follow for a follow ;) #projecthumanity

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Comments & Feedback (6)

cupcakechick
cupcakechick
Jan 27, 2013 at 11:44 AM

Welldone it's good babe

HingAling24
HingAling24
Jan 27, 2013 at 3:56 PM

@cupcakechick thank you very much! I think your my biggest fan apart from my mum haha 👍👍😘😜

cupcakechick
cupcakechick
Jan 27, 2013 at 4:27 PM

Yer probaly am since I like u and everything lol

HingAling24
HingAling24
Jan 27, 2013 at 5:07 PM

@cupcakechick I

HingAling24
HingAling24
Jan 27, 2013 at 5:08 PM

Oooops was gonna say I'm very flattered but I'm kinda really old lol I assume your still in school which would make you quite young! :(

HingAling24
HingAling24
Jan 27, 2013 at 5:09 PM

Always here to talk to though and be a friend! 👍😜😘

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