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The Perfect Fella

I'm going to be honest
I'm never easily pleased
The man who wants to take my hand
Has to live with being teased

My perfect guy would have to be
Someone who is never afraid
Willing to love me forever
Even when my youth does fade

I want a man who'll make me smile
When inside I feel like dying
I want him to make me laugh
Through all the tears I'm crying

Bad boys are far too tempting
Bikers are a good start
But this bad boy better be careful
That he doesn't break my heart

I will admit I like adventure
I hope my guy is the same
Willing to take a risk with me
Willing to share a name

Being a bit odd is part of me
I need him to show respect
Never ever trying to change me
I'm not an item to inspect

He has to always be there for me
Ready to catch me when I fall
And while looks aren't that important
I'd like it if he was tall...

Brave and strong, but also gentle
Supports me in all that I do
Someone I could rely upon
Together we always get through

I like a guy who is quite smart
Intelligent conversations are a must
I like someone who is always honest
Someone that I can trust

I like a guy with a tough exterior
But inside he's quiet and kind
Someone willing to stand up for others
Why's he so hard to find?

I'd like a guy who loves me for me
I can take care of myself
If I choose a guy it's for personality
Not for looks or wealth

If he is willing to cherish me
And love me for the rest of my life
Only then can he ask me nicely
If I would be his wife...

I.Sparrow

*Inspired by Eddie12309's 'Ladies', leelee's amazing 'and gentlemen...' and RDE's response to that with 'My gentleman'*

PS: I have just reread this to myself and i have arrived at the conclusion that I'm obviously far too bloody picky!

IndiaSparrow

@IndiaSparrow

Strange swirling thoughts spin in my head and jump onto paper! 18 years young.

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Comments & Feedback (27)

@leelee101 and @RDE and @eddie12309, thanks for inspiration!

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Great write. You definitely know what your looking for and I would agree with all your points. Oh and also...... I'm not a man. πŸ˜‚just a mans nickname πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ’š

@eddie12309 now altered... I should be used to that, after all my nickname is Indy... πŸ˜‚ and thanks very much, I know I'm very picky :P

@dodged haha, attempting to drop a less than subtle hint there ad? I demand to see you on a motorbike! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„πŸ’—

@IndiaSparrow picky? It'll just make it all the more sweet when he does show up hunny... Great write Indy! β€πŸ˜˜πŸ‘

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@leelee101 I'm hoping for the best! One day I might find the butter willing to put up with me! I hope! Thanks πŸ˜„πŸ’—

*nutter, not butter. Damn you autocorrect. πŸ‘Ώ

@dodged cheeky, as per bloody usual! 😜 any bike with an engine would do me nicely πŸ˜πŸ’—

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@dodged I will admit that made me laugh. One box ticked off. Only god knows how many to go! I'm a very complicated person to keep happy πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰πŸ’—

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@IndiaSparrow πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Great write@IndiaSparrow

@magicmilkshake thanks! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

Lol this is my idea too. But at the moment I'mfateI love this.

I mean at the moment I'm far too young

But I love this

@Twilightianalex how old are you? I'm not exactly at the marrying age yet! But still, a decent lad would be nice to find πŸ˜‰πŸ’—

At least you know what you like, great poemπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@IndiaSparrow I'm 13. How old are you?

@Stablish thanks, I suppose it could be a good thing πŸ˜‰πŸ’—

@Twilightianalex 17, so marriage is off the cards for a long time yet. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œ

@IndiaSparrow totally agree with you. Strong men are gorgeous. You find any you send then my way first! You admitted your too young πŸ˜‰

Loved it! Especially the comment at the end 😊

@Liza haha, I'll think about it. If I find an amazing older guy, I'm going to have to look for sons :P

@chy thanks πŸ˜œπŸ’—

@dodged vain

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@kessie we are friends outside of opuss, you have to know his sense of humour to get it

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