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What Is Going On?

I don't understand what is going on. I'm only four.
Everyone was outside running for their lives, screaming "it's coming, it's coming!"
What was it? Nobody tells me anything. I knew something was wrong when Mummy and Daddy were talking hurriedly in the kitchen one night.
"How can we tell him?" My mummy said, crying into her hands. My daddy moved to comfort her, stroking her hair and whispering "It will be alright, it will be alright..."
I walked in, and went to hug my mummy. But before I could move again she ran out of the room crying.
I was so confused. But I understand now. She was trying to protect me from the horrors going on outside right now. I don't know where my parents are, they must be amongst the horde of people running for their lives.
I am not. I am alone, all alone. Hiding in my wardrobe, afraid to go out. I can hear noises, more screams. All I want to do is cuddle up with my parents and forget the commotion going on outside.
Now I don't even know where my parents are. Whatever is out there, it's turning my world upside down.

JamieGreen95

@JamieGreen95

Kid from Essex, currently studying AS English Lit. Get following!

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Comments welcomed, want some constructive criticism so I can write better pieces! Thank you :)

It's really good, but a needs a satisfying end :)

What so a happy ending, or so I can build on it later if necessary?

I'd seriously think about continuing this mate, it's very good 👍👍👍

@glensaggs thank you, will play around with a few ideas and try to write a new one :)

@JamieGreen95 Please carry on:)

Well I have an exam tomorrow, but after that I'll definitely try and write a part 2, thanks guys for the support :)

@bethcharles @glensaggs @alligatorsky part 2 is now uploaded, give it a read please! Would also love some ideas on how to go on from here if possible :)

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