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What Is Going On? Part 2

A thin sliver of light crept through the gap between the doors of my wardrobe. At some point I must've fallen asleep, despite the commotion last night.
It took a while for the events of last night to register. Where are mummy and daddy? What is "it"? What do I do now?
I decided to creep out of the wardrobe slowly, in case the monster from last night had come just for me.
Quick look outside; nothing. I took a few steps outside, surveying the house. As far as I could see, everything was as it was last night. Until I reached the window.
A scene of horror greeted me. Cars were strewn across our quiet neighbourly road, trees uprooted and felled as if they were made out of feathers. I don't know how long I was looking out of the window, gazing at the desolation and destruction that greeted me.
My thoughts snapped back to my parents. Where were they? Did they even survive this? I began to cry at this thought. My world would be empty without my mummy and daddy. They had to have survive this, they just had to.

JamieGreen95

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Really good mate I can't criticize it at all. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Thank you mate! How would you like me to move the story on from here, or should I leave it at 2 parts?

@JamieGreen95 carry on mate it's good, it might be hard as your only 4 years old maybe, if you don't mind me saying ๐Ÿ˜ if you was a little older it would be easier I dunno 9 or 10 what you think? ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@glensaggs that's an awesome idea mate! What, so like I could start part 3 with "6 years have past" or something similar, it was going to be quite hard to carry on as a 4 year old aha :')

@JamieGreen95 I'll look forward to what you come up with mate ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

Cheers, might attempt to write part 3 tonight if I get time!

@JamieGreen95 , love this! So much drama but you, the writer haven't rushed:) please tag me in a comment when part three is written! Love this:)

@bethcharles Will do, thank you for the comments! :)

I think this is an amazing story. It's so capturing from every line xxxxx

@taylergoatier Thank you babe :) cxxxx

@glensaggs @bethcharles @taylergoatier Part 3 is now up, please give it a read! :)

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