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Save Her

The tears, they fall so fast,
As I sit here next to you,
You lay there, eyes so still,
Please tell me what to do.

They say it's up to fate,
But there is another way,
I can feel it in my bones,
No matter what they say.

Please let me save her life,
I would but I don't know how,
She'll slowly slip away,
Unless you show me now.

My sweet, please look at me,
With your eyes that shined so bright,
Now they stare ahead so dull,
Empty of their shining light.

I know not what to do,
As my tears begin to flood,
As you slowly fade away,
Amidst this pooling blood.

Jamtots

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Comments & Feedback (3)

Caught at my heart. So sad and beautiful ๐Ÿ’›

Very well written๐Ÿ‘Œ

@jojo72 @Stablish Thanks (:

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