I'm crying out for help,
But none will answer me.
I'm begging for salvation,
In a large and empty sea.
Please remove your apathy,
And take a closer look.
You stare, but do not see me,
Though I am an open book.
I'll share with you my secret,
If you promise not to frown.
I'll remove my false facade,
If you catch me when I'm down.
For the only thing I need,
Is a place to rest my head.
And for someone to listen,
To these words I've never said.
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My eyes are tired, Red with pain, Drained out, Like desert rain. Dull ache Through my bones, Crushed silk, Love on loans. Fairy wings Through locked doors, Unpainted walls, Red foot sores.
The shower my bed. The bathroom stall and my head. These are the places my tears have been shed. Into my pillow and out in the street. Inside my nightmares and inside my dreams.
Wounds of war, healed with stitches, Wounds of soul, healed with words, Pain inflicted, Cruel to me.
Silent night hold me tight. Please stay by my side. There's nothing more I need in life than my favourite place to hide. You give me so much comfort. Everything I need.
You ask if I am okay. I really don't know what to say. I try to open my mouth to speak. But words in my head are playing hide and seek. So I keep quiet and try to smile.
Don't tell me I'm beautiful. It makes me hurt worse. I despise your kind words-. Sorry to be terse. When you tell me I'm worth it. I just want to collapse. Because I can't listen.
I need inspiration In the form of a midnight lover I need hope In the form of a friend I need wisdom In the form of a sage Most of all I need love And someone who won't run away I want...
Your face is river, ever flowing, changing upon every tide, A simple poison is not knowing, whether you should run and hide. But most time it's contained as so by fake, unjust serenity.
Don't be sad. There is always that special someone who does notice and that's what makes life so sweet. π
@crapellaa @jojo72 @misslittleDHP @leelee101 @Stablish @Jamtots sorry to fill up your news notification thingies, but this is quite similar to one of my first peices, the things that can't be said. I'm not accusing @Jamtots of plagiarism at all, but if you liked this, maybe check mine out! Please?
@bop365 Definitely not plagiarism lol π I gave it a read, it's good and I see the similarities (:
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