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Layers of life peeling away
Question is;
What remains at the end of the day?
I know it is wrong
Trying to hang on
I could finally be free
If I could only be me
Question is;
Who am I?
I have no idea anymore
Not that I ever really knew before
Dazed and confused
Broken and bruised
Question is;
Will I ever find my way?
No, how could I?
Too busy trying to stay.

I'm sorry. I'm willing to say but I know it can't undo what has been done and it won't ease the pain in your heart. Instead, let me write this to let you know that I regretted my actions and cheating on you guys is certainly an unforgiven mistake. I totally deserve all the anger and resentment from you for what I have put you through.
@iPuss @stablish @leelee101 and all other Opussians, Sorry guys.

Jatt

@Jatt

Masters in smartarseness with sarcasm as major! (Follow me for the funniest quotes, beautiful poems & stories + an instant followback)

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Comments & Feedback (49)

At least you apologise, I didn't think you would be back, I believe in second chances, I can't talk for everyone though. Thanks for the apology.

I appreciate that you are willing to apologise.

I agree with @Stablish, I believe in second chances.

I'm sure I speak for everyone when I thank you for your apology. Thing

I thought that was a heartfelt apology ;)

I thank you for having the good grace to apologise. Not sure if everyone will agree only time will tell. Trust is a hard thing to earn and you've only ruined it for yourself. Question is; why do it? We were all liking your stuff anyway and I'm sure you'd have made headway in the ranks, if that was what you wanted. Let's see how it goes from here. Peace ✌

I agree with @Stablish too

@Stablish @IndiaSparrow @Weirdwolf @naaviie Thanks for accepting my apology.

@Jatt - make sure you don't blow this chance. Keep Opussia a happy, fair community 😊

@Jatt Thanks for the apology. I hope you've learned😊

@jatt...well you have balls...saying sorry and holding up your hands to admit that you've cocked up takes guts. Have confidence in yourself and your work, dust yourself off and start again in an honourable way...your work was great...believe in that...thank you for the apology, I very much accept your apology though I can't speak for everybody...keep writing :):):)

@misslittleDHP thank you very much :)

@Jatt As long as you learn from what has happened, anyone could exploit the rank system if they wanted but was the feeling of a fake high rank really worth it? When I said your poetry was good I meant it, just forget about the whole rank thing and just write.

Not good enough!! What kind of twat makes 36+ accounts just to like himself!! People work hard to post stuff for you to come out and do this shit!! No way fuck your apology 😑 not fucking good enough!!

I believe in second chances. You're still an A1 DICK HEAD to me. The trust has been broken and you are being watched. P.s I LOVE how you appologise to all my friends you lil twat and not to me. I can forgive but I wont forget. You're a brave one even showing your face considering so many wanna smash it in. I've un followed you. Your disloyal undecent and a cheat. You bring shame and dishonour.

What you did was awful. You are brave for showing your face considering alot of us want to smash it in. Your a dishonourable jerk. I can forgive... In time... But not forget. Think of the damage you have done for yourself. You could have gotten there by yourself the RIGHT way. I've un followed you because to me you are scum now. Good luck getting your top place. I'd safely say im going to protect our king with all I have if it meant stopping you from cheating youre way up.

@iPuss I will protect the king also I am the queen this little shit doesn't deserve our forgiveness @Stablish your too soft πŸ˜’

@aleishagayle20 I know, I'm so sorry, please forgive me. -He gets on his knees and begs for forgiveness- ( I can't help it ) lol

@Stablish -kisses his forehead- I forgive you because I love you all -sighs- just hate people taking the piss with my bees 😠

@aleishagayle20 Yeah, it takes the piss, lee lee was fairly soft too so I'm not alone. Let's just see how things work out.

@leelee101 way too soft @Stablish I know lol well whatever my post is done time to move on just saying I don't forgive and I don't forget this apology is not good enough!!

@aleishagayle20 Yeah, I'm way too soft. I will get there though. πŸ‘Š

@Stablish πŸ‘Š lol it's okay I like you just the way you are 😘

@Jatt what the fuck!! 😑😑 stop deleting comments just because you don't want to hear it!!! @Stablish @iPuss @misslittleDHP @naaviie @leelee101 this asswipe is deleting comments but he's meant to be sorry? Dickhead arrggghh!!!

@aleishagayle20 Deleted my top ones for now, it's an addictive activity.

(I did that is)

@Stablish arrggghh!! This guy is taking the piss 😑😠😑

@aleishagayle20 I'm not deleting your comments

@Jatt liar!! @Ipuss he's saying he's not!! 😠😑😠

@iPuss @aleishagayle20 @Stablish ok I was a little soft, thank you for the protection you give. So he's deleting your comments now is he?

@aleishagayle20 @Stablish @iPuss - deleting comments to skew our perspective is a brilliant way to blow your second chance. I never want to think badly of people, but now you're making it very tempting.

@leelee101 it's okay peace king that's just you -blows him a kiss- yeah he's meant to be deleting comments 😠

@aleishagayle20 I may have to compose... πŸ˜‰

@leelee101 oh babe yes 😍 haha your words are too magic lol hehe mwahahaha -cackles like crazy woman-

@aleishagayle20 Haha. Funny how that guy just keeps going. He could've just picked up his act, and been a good guy lolπŸ‘Ώ

@leelee101 @aleishagayle20 - the King and Queen, such opposing approaches met with harmony in writing 😜

What a twat. Let's step on him; make him feel like the ant he isπŸ˜„

@DuRoLuRo I know right?! 😑 well hell has no fury like a woman especially a queen πŸ‘Ώ

@naaviie haha I know light and dark mwahahaha best to be opposites more variety πŸ˜„πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

@aleishagayle20 - keeps Opussia in balance 😜

@naaviie hahaha damn right! Going to flip this guy upside down tho πŸ˜œπŸ‘Ώ

@naaviie yes well doing what he's doing at the mo is starting to annoy, so, to tip the balance slightly...

@aleishagayle20 @leelee101 - uh oh royal wrath! 😜πŸ”₯πŸ”₯😜

Sorry I don't accept, it's easy to say sorry to a screen and not mean it, you had over 36 chances to realise it was wrong and unfair to authors like myself.

@jatt...deleting comments is a no no...you surely expected some fallout?...oh dear all this dis harmony is making my head throb some more !! @aleishagayle20 @iPuss ...I am a big emotional person, can't help it....maybe being poorly madam has made me more susceptible to my softer side?

@leelee101 oooo i like the sound of that king lee @MrAlex agree totally babe @misslittleDHP it's okay just pointing out obvious πŸ˜’

Ok people, enough is enough. I'm freezing this forum. No comments have been deleted by anyone other than the author. The point has been made and it's time to move on.

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