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Death.

Poem I wrote myself. (:

Roses are red
Violets are blue.
Death is coming
Coming for you

He's holding a knife
He has a gun
He'll take your life
So you better run.

Run as fast as you can
To the next room
Away from the man
Who will kill you soon.

Don't turn around
He's right there
He'll take you down
Because he doesnt care.

I'm sorry I did this.
I'm sorry I lied.
Your voice I'll miss
Now say good-bye.

So, roses are red,
Violets are blue
Death is coming.
Coming for you.

LIAM7

@LIAM7

Hi my name is Liam O'conor and I'm from Kildare, Ireland.Im 12 and have 1 dog 2 cats.Expect some dark poems sometimes story's and mostly quotes and jokes :) please follow

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This is great mate😄

@Stablish thanks I'm new

Ooo love this great work 😊

@LIAM7 keep em coming, I love your style😄

Wow for your first post great stuff 😊

@aleishagayle20 Thanks!

Hey, please could you take a read of my story? 8 chapters an more twists and turns to come!

Nice one

@LIAM7 good work! @WildOneKezza you shouldn't be saying this on over people's opusses

Nice on mate 👍but I don't think I'll us it for St. Valentines day lol

Use

Like it. Gives tension and is pretty scary too 😲

1st Opuss! Well done and keep going! 😊

@leelee101 thank you

@LIAM7 great stuff 😊 you should read my Opuss Death's Lament you'll see the other side of the reaper 😉 but a fabulous start

@LIAM7 Great flow, it's awesome.

Omg... Amazing!

Really good 😊

Ahhh :) scary!! But good :P

Sad! But you are good to write :D

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