Cinderella scrubbed the walls and made the table shine,
She cleaned and cleaned her very best until there was no grime,
Then, one Spring day, she heard the news,
There was to be a ball,
Of course, despite her lack of shoes,
She begged to have it all,
A knocking came, soon, at the door,
And then the line that won its lore,
She said "I'm your Fairy Godmother",
And a fairy like no other,
Leather belt below black shirt,
But Cindy wasn't on alert,
This Fairy standing in her home,
Had dashed to ground a magic stone,
A cloud of light,
And when it cleared,
The Fairy had quite disappeared,
Along with her step-sister's jewels,
And all her diamonds on the stool,
Poor Cindy was left in despair,
Without a party dress to wear.
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Comments & Feedback (31)
I love these, you should do... Beauty and the Beast next. The beautiful girl who stuck around with a beast because he had a big house and lots of money.
Moral: just because some old bag in a dress says she's your fairy godmother, don't believe her and keep an eye on the jewels!
@MelchiorJ13 mwhahaha! I did beauty and the beast as a school play last year and the fiendish music teacher cast me as..... Part of the angry mob! π‘
@MelchiorJ13 and they gave me only a lantern to carry! Oh yes, I'm going to kill the Brady with my super dangerous lantern! As if! π‘
@naaviie I love it too, I know all the songs off by heart now, though it is not so fantastic when you are a angry women carrying a lantern and not part of 'be our guest'
@naaviie why thank you π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ yes, I am, and I just got rid of my very restrictive writer's block, can write about anything I like now π as far as Fairytales go, Rumplestiltskin is my favourite ππ
@MelchiorJ13 I like little red riding hood and beauty and the beast and rapunzel and the little mermaid (@MelchiorJ13 you should do that one) and snow white!
@awesomeannie @naaviie when I have writer's block, I can't write about anything, but this prolonged Writer's Block meant I could only write if I had strong inspiration- but now I'm free! πππ
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