Part Two
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"Hey Anna." I stare up. The familiar scruffy blonde tangled hair and watery blue eyes gives away exactly who the man is.
"L-Luke?" I stutter, "You came!" I open out my shivering arms and welcome his tender embracing hug.
"I love you Anna, that's why I came for you." His magical voice is both soft and clear.
"I do too," I muttered back, breathing in his scent. I quickly dress whilst he looks on. Once I was decent, we walked hand in hand out of the house and into his flashy black car. Reaching for the seatbelt, he murmured something:
"You won't need that." I sat there stunned. Suddenly, the car pulls away at top speed, and my head crashes into the front. Now I am falling down into blackness, down, down, down......
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