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Close To Paradise

I live in a place that's close to paradise.
We get all the beauty, but we still have the vice.
Many who visit, feel the need to remain.
They love the sleaze but for the beauty they'll not abstain.

So here where the grass is greener,
But compared to your city, the streets are meaner.
This beautiful place has been filled with smut.
And now it's been consumed, it's stuck in this rut.

But for my hearts sake, I really can't leave.
I grew up here, amongst the sleaze.
So I'll have to stay, for it's here I belong.
I'll just have to come to terms with this filthy throng.

Β©Odd

Odd

@Odd

Just a some what "odd" girl, living in what feels like a glass box. Hello Opuss, the savour of my sanity. my little private world amongst a life of being watched and watching.

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Comments & Feedback (18)

I used to visit there as a child with my family - remember the 'lake' and rope-pull swings like it was yesterday.... (it was actually about 25 years ago!) πŸ’šπŸ’›

But it's Essex! Ya gotta love it hun... πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 Essex... Dengie... Unfortunately the smut you find over the river to your bit is a little different here. Take the people away... And well. Little old Essex would be a fabulous place. Haha

@leelee101 I lie... Just the orange, chavy, stupid people :3 I think we'd be safe ;)

@Odd lol Basvegas is the epitome of sin

@Odd haha! It ain't great is it! πŸ˜‚ my bit isn't fantastic, but it's not so bad I suppose. At least I can say I live on an island...makes it sound a bit exotic... πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 I like on a peninsula... Unfortunately I'm attached haha. Although we are extremely secluded probably more secluded than Mersea?

@Odd nah I'm more secluded... No-one comes to dear old Canvey on purpose... πŸ˜‚β€πŸ˜˜

Lol @leelee101 Essex is ridiculous. The further west you go, the worse it gets. Eastside mofo ;) haha -attempts gangsta sign-

@Odd hoho don't go there hunny... πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚β€

@Odd @leelee101 I'm fro Romford 😳😱😱 You don't get much worse!! Lived there for about 23 years of my God-forsaken life!!! Ah well, I'm out now πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@MrsS haha. Your right you dont get much worse... You don't even get the pretty stuff I do. πŸ˜”

@Odd We had lots of people staggering around and throwing up in town though! Quality.... πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@MrsS lol further west you are in Essex. The worse it gets, clearly theres some form

Of black hole just inside the M25 that takes you to hell... Clearly ugly sins been escaping.

@Odd It was pretty grim! I hardly ever go back (if I can help it!) Sadly, I was a big part of it all, but that's a story for another day... Another post.... 😚

@MrsS haha... Youthful mistakes and lessons 😘 I've got a few of the yet to come... I hope.

@Odd Lessons? Oh yes, too many though (I wasn't a quick learner on that particular front!) πŸ˜–πŸ˜‰β˜Ί

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