Ambiguities & Options

Pickuuu • 8 followers

Hi. Alright. Obviously, nobody's really reading The Merciless Death of Jordan Virginia Masters. I'm not entirely sure if I'm gonna discontinue it, or finish it. Deciding to complete it would be a true commitment, as the story just started. At this pace, it'll be a long time before finishing. So, should I continue it at all or not? In case you're wondering, the plot is currently in the most uneventful, most boring part as of about chapters three and four. Later on, things get fun, mean, and gory. Four out of the six characters introduced so far will eventually die. So, you tell me. Should I continue The Merciless Death, or just call it quits? You can respond in the comments if you want to. In case you're reading this without any previous knowledge of The Merciless Death, you could find some of the story in my list o' oppusses. I'd like to hear what people have to say. If no one says anything, I'll take it as a 'discontinue it!' Okay. That's all. Until next time. ouo

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nikujagagirl

Jan 13, 2013 at 1:33 AM

Please continue it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story and I want to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! Please don't stop!!!!!!!!

natalee

Jan 13, 2013 at 1:59 AM

I think you should keep going. I've just now started to read the story and I'm really enjoying it so far :)

mAngel

Jan 13, 2013 at 4:55 AM

OK...this is awkward because I haven't read it. But I've learned from experience (and I'm sure many experts would agree) that it's never a good idea to quit something just because nobody else seems to be reading it. Remember Emily Dickenson--she never published anything in her lifetime. She died convinced nobody was ever going to read her work, and now she's a household name. I can't wait to read your story! <3