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Limbo

This isn't what you want,
It isn't what you need.
I've lured you into this,
Stemmed by my own greed.
I don't want her to have you,
But I don't want you that bad,
My jealousy is bubbling,
Isn't that sad?
I don't love you enough to keep you,
I don't love you less enough to let you go.
So I guess we'll just be stuck here,
In this exasperating limbo.

PoppyA

@PoppyA

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Comments & Feedback (13)

That's a great piece pops πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜πŸ‘

@leelee101 ; thank you πŸ˜ŒπŸ’—

Whoa, such torment! πŸ’”

@naaviie ; it's not autobiographical but we were just talking in the office this morning and I felt like writing ☺ glad you liked it though x

Phew! Well done for capturing an external emotion, that is hard!! πŸ’šπŸ’š

Really well captured Poppy.... Uncannily sums up a lot of my feelings.... Nice write ! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ƒ

Brilliant piece, like @naaviie said its hard to write something you don't actually feel. Good work! πŸ‘

@DaddyDooDahs ; glad you enjoyed it πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

@Irrational_Kimmi ; thank you, I'm really flattered by everyone's comments πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

πŸƒπŸ’¨πŸ˜ excellent pops 🌺

@glen ; hehe thanking you ☺😽

Wow this is so good. The first piece I have read on this site and already I want to read more. Well done : D

@NickyX ; thank you - and welcome to Opuss! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

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